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I just got into a fight with my mother and now my orange girl kitty refuses to leave my side
 SixBears
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Seems so. Can you please put it in the bug forum?
 Siku of Kinapak
12:01:05 Siku
Hmm. Hot spring fed everyone but didn't heal everyone. DH healed to 100 instead of 150. A few other wolves didn't heal at all. Is this a new glitch?
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@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer
 Eye of Eternity
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andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(
 Andypaws
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Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-
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Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!
 Eye of Eternity
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andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^
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Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.
 Eye of Eternity
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andy
oh geez are you okay?
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@Sir skales maybe and welcome
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Just got back from the ER. Woohoo
 Eye of Eternity
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i cant tell if i love or hate the moon faced man hes so weird he gives me bad vibes but in such an endearing way??
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@Nin
Im sorry your only okayish. Do you want to talk about it

Thank you
 Serpents
10:45:53 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@sir skales eh okayish hope you feel better
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@Nin
Not very good read now. I am really stressed and in lots of pain.

How are you doing though
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@sir skales how are you?
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Hello Nin :)

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 Moonfall
12:04:32 Many moons, one me
I just got into a fight with my mother and now my orange girl kitty refuses to leave my side
 SixBears
12:02:21 evebot
Seems so. Can you please put it in the bug forum?
 Siku of Kinapak
12:01:05 Siku
Hmm. Hot spring fed everyone but didn't heal everyone. DH healed to 100 instead of 150. A few other wolves didn't heal at all. Is this a new glitch?
 Destinations End
11:41:39 Toliska, Desti, Coy
Back
 Serpents
11:12:51 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer
 Eye of Eternity
11:09:57 tern | they/he
andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(
 Andypaws
11:04:16 Andy [he/they]
Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-
 Andypaws
11:03:03 Andy [he/they]
Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!
 Eye of Eternity
11:01:00 tern | they/he
andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^
 Andypaws
10:59:03 Andy [he/they]
Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.
 Eye of Eternity
10:55:43 tern | they/he
andy
oh geez are you okay?
 Destinations End
10:55:03 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Nin
<3
My pms are open if you like
 Serpents
10:54:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Sir skales maybe and welcome
 Andypaws
10:53:59 Andy [he/they]
Just got back from the ER. Woohoo
 Eye of Eternity
10:53:54 tern | they/he
i cant tell if i love or hate the moon faced man hes so weird he gives me bad vibes but in such an endearing way??
 Destinations End
10:48:52 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Nin
Im sorry your only okayish. Do you want to talk about it

Thank you
 Serpents
10:45:53 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@sir skales eh okayish hope you feel better
 Destinations End
10:42:29 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Nin
Not very good read now. I am really stressed and in lots of pain.

How are you doing though
 Serpents
10:40:26 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@sir skales how are you?
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Hello Nin :)




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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