Wolf Play : Critique this please!

09:59:45 Many moons, one me

Wild
Are you the only one cooking meals?

09:56:13 Stalking chat

Moon,
I always like Mac' n' cheese but the family is picky

09:55:58 Many moons, one me

I definitely need to learn to refresh

09:54:58 Many moons, one me

Wild, I feel ya, I have to come up with something different everyday and if I do something twice in the same week I get grumbles. What do you have, or what are you feeling?

09:54:38 Stalking chat

Buggy,
okay!

09:52:56 Lucky Ladybug

If it's for your family then spaghetti is always good :)

09:51:25 Lucky Ladybug

Wild
In actuality I like to get fancy and make charcuterie boards for myself, so I get lunchmeats (pepperoni is my fav), pickles, fruit, bread/crackers, and cheese and put them all on a plate. The cheese can be string cheese and a sandwich checks half the boxes. Plus fruit can be so simple like applesause. I like yogurt too for my girl dinner

09:51:14 Stalking chat

Ezra,
oh my I haven't had mozzarella sticks in SO long :c

09:50:58 Many moons, one me

Wild, still delicious, I add some garlic and herbs while I'm cooking it and it comes out so good. Any of your favorite spices/herbs should work

09:50:55 Stalking chat

Buggy,
ooh okay, I've had that quite a bit and my family doesn't like having something alot sadly :p

09:50:37 ezra, he/him

ohh the dining hall has mozzarella sticks tomorrow.. i should sleep to get there faster....

09:49:19 Lucky Ladybug

Wild
mac and cheese but without the tuna?

09:48:47 Lucky Ladybug

Moon
yeahhh I'm not allowed to lock the bathroom door, and my mom once had to walk in on me naked to help me get back up. Luckily I only bruised my hip a bit then but it was awkward xD

09:48:47 Many moons, one me

Most basic thing I can think of

09:48:32 Many moons, one me

Wild
Mac and cheese with canned tuna and extra cheese is always good

09:47:49 Stalking chat

what should I make for dinner chat?
(PLEASE something basic LOL)

09:47:05 Many moons, one me

Buggy
Oh well then definitely ignore me. We don't want you getting hurt

09:46:39 Lucky Ladybug

Ezra
LMAO that's kinda funny

09:46:19 Lucky Ladybug

Moon
I took a cool shower earlier before the lotion and that helped! Hot showers make me dizzy due to pots so they're a no=go

09:45:29 ezra, he/him

one time i had a long-lasting allergic reaction where my whole body was itchy and my face swelled up. i was covering myself in itch cream for a few days

turns out i'm allergic to itch cream lol

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09:59:45 Many moons, one me

Wild
Are you the only one cooking meals?

09:56:13 Stalking chat

Moon,
I always like Mac' n' cheese but the family is picky

09:55:58 Many moons, one me

I definitely need to learn to refresh

09:54:58 Many moons, one me

Wild, I feel ya, I have to come up with something different everyday and if I do something twice in the same week I get grumbles. What do you have, or what are you feeling?

09:54:38 Stalking chat

Buggy,
okay!

09:52:56 Lucky Ladybug

If it's for your family then spaghetti is always good :)

09:51:25 Lucky Ladybug

09:51:14 Stalking chat

Ezra,
oh my I haven't had mozzarella sticks in SO long :c

09:50:58 Many moons, one me

Wild, still delicious, I add some garlic and herbs while I'm cooking it and it comes out so good. Any of your favorite spices/herbs should work

09:50:55 Stalking chat

Buggy,
ooh okay, I've had that quite a bit and my family doesn't like having something alot sadly :p

09:50:37 ezra, he/him

ohh the dining hall has mozzarella sticks tomorrow.. i should sleep to get there faster....

09:49:19 Lucky Ladybug

Wild
mac and cheese but without the tuna?

09:48:47 Lucky Ladybug

Moon
yeahhh I'm not allowed to lock the bathroom door, and my mom once had to walk in on me naked to help me get back up. Luckily I only bruised my hip a bit then but it was awkward xD

09:48:47 Many moons, one me

Most basic thing I can think of

09:48:32 Many moons, one me

Wild
Mac and cheese with canned tuna and extra cheese is always good

09:47:49 Stalking chat

what should I make for dinner chat?
(PLEASE something basic LOL)

09:47:05 Many moons, one me

Buggy
Oh well then definitely ignore me. We don't want you getting hurt

09:46:39 Lucky Ladybug

Ezra
LMAO that's kinda funny

09:46:19 Lucky Ladybug

Moon
I took a cool shower earlier before the lotion and that helped! Hot showers make me dizzy due to pots so they're a no=go

09:45:29 ezra, he/him

one time i had a long-lasting allergic reaction where my whole body was itchy and my face swelled up. i was covering myself in itch cream for a few days

turns out i'm allergic to itch cream lol

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September 12, 2019 06:52 PM

Magnus Bane

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https://i.postimg.cc/ZK5ydCtx/3-B21850-D-D586-4-E9-C-B93-D-4-D846-E012-F6-C.png

https://i.postimg.cc/9FgwtCc5/DA3-E4-CE9-2174-4970-89-E8-81338-DB842-D3.png

Please tell me your honest opinions. It's a species I've created!

Edited at September 12, 2019 07:45 PM by Magnus Bane

September 12, 2019 06:54 PM

Maverick

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Maybe fix the horns?

September 12, 2019 06:58 PM

Former Pack

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<div style="text-align: center;">what kind of species are they?

<div style="text-align: center;">canine or something else?

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<div style="text-align: center;">I'd like to know before critiquing.

September 12, 2019 07:01 PM

Magnus Bane

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quill said:
<div align="center">what kind of species are they?

<div align="center">canine or something else?

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<div align="center">I'd like to know before critiquing.

It's honestly just something thrown together

September 12, 2019 07:01 PM

Magnus Bane

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King of Hell said:
Maybe fix the horns?

What do you suggest I do to them?

September 12, 2019 07:13 PM

Nox

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I think they are super cute, but maybe the front shoulders could be defined a little more? I don't know. I'm going to be stalking the adopt thread if you end up turning this species into adoptables. You're doing great, I think I saw that you just started doing digital stuff and it honestly looks like you've been doing it awhile. ^^