Wolf Play : Critique

12:53:19 Many moons, one me

Am*

12:52:56 Many moons, one me

Rat
Ah, well that's depressing. Fair though cause I was gonna soup them anyway if nobody took them
Xanth, Rat
It's 1:52 for me... Joy of timezones at work

12:50:24 Vash | Xy

Rat
Hehe it's 7:50am for me🤭

12:49:56 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Then if they win the wolf it dies atomically because there is no space

12:48:57 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Xy
Morning? Bruh it’s 11:49 pm here/silly ish

12:48:12 Many moons, one me

Random ish question. What happens if someone bids on your wolves in auction, but they have no den space?

12:40:07 Vash | Xy

Morning

12:29:01 Scorpion

I got this, and a golden WOW claw award???

12:28:47 Scorpion

Congrats! You are the second place Hunter League winner of Wolves of Warfare and have won 5 apples and 250 mushrooms

12:04:27 Caesar

So.many missed bones im gonna cry

12:03:11 Caesar

Fuck, i fell asleep before i was dome mass breeding >.<

12:01:02 Cryptic | Crypt

She did not hold out. Ouch.

12:00:52 Will

*jinxed

12:00:43 Will

I think you mixed it 😭

11:59:43 Cryptic | Crypt

Wrong wolf, that's her daughter
-WP Click-

11:59:12 Cryptic | Crypt

-WP Click-
Literally need her to hold out for like 3 more minutes. I bred earlier than I meant to.

11:57:10 Will

@Crypt

If they're born after the season change, yup

11:46:42 Cryptic | Crypt

Just to make sure, pups born at 12:00 are considered spring 1 right?

11:42:30 Will

Hello party people, how is everyone?

11:23:37 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I’m eepy but I can’t eep yet *sigh* I’d funk up my sleep schedule if I sleep now :’)

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12:53:19 Many moons, one me

Am*

12:52:56 Many moons, one me

Rat
Ah, well that's depressing. Fair though cause I was gonna soup them anyway if nobody took them
Xanth, Rat
It's 1:52 for me... Joy of timezones at work

12:50:24 Vash | Xy

Rat
Hehe it's 7:50am for me🤭

12:49:56 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Then if they win the wolf it dies atomically because there is no space

12:48:57 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Xy
Morning? Bruh it’s 11:49 pm here/silly ish

12:48:12 Many moons, one me

Random ish question. What happens if someone bids on your wolves in auction, but they have no den space?

12:40:07 Vash | Xy

Morning

12:29:01 Scorpion

I got this, and a golden WOW claw award???

12:28:47 Scorpion

Congrats! You are the second place Hunter League winner of Wolves of Warfare and have won 5 apples and 250 mushrooms

12:04:27 Caesar

So.many missed bones im gonna cry

12:03:11 Caesar

Fuck, i fell asleep before i was dome mass breeding >.<

12:01:02 Cryptic | Crypt

She did not hold out. Ouch.

12:00:52 Will

*jinxed

12:00:43 Will

I think you mixed it 😭

11:59:43 Cryptic | Crypt

Wrong wolf, that's her daughter
-WP Click-

11:59:12 Cryptic | Crypt

-WP Click-
Literally need her to hold out for like 3 more minutes. I bred earlier than I meant to.

11:57:10 Will

@Crypt

If they're born after the season change, yup

11:46:42 Cryptic | Crypt

Just to make sure, pups born at 12:00 are considered spring 1 right?

11:42:30 Will

Hello party people, how is everyone?

11:23:37 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I’m eepy but I can’t eep yet *sigh* I’d funk up my sleep schedule if I sleep now :’)

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM