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01:03:53 ezra, he/him

winter-
ooh that sucks :(

01:02:49 Winter

Dude I bought 10 apples bought ONE relic space it refresh and purchased bought another one now my apples are gone ugh ;-;

01:00:15 ezra, he/him

i should have a muskox character

01:00:12 Acorn (She/Her)

Thankfully this engine isn't too terribly loud - it still hurts though :")

12:57:07 Acorn (She/Her)

Renee
She does indeed lol
She turned 8 today

12:56:06 renee

@Acorn
She knows she's that girl

12:56:03 Acorn (She/Her)

I swear if my neighbor starts up this jet engine while my sensitive young cousin is over >.>

12:50:46 Acorn (She/Her)

Renee
She said meah
Which probably means thank you or who couldn't

Also I love your avatar

12:48:50 renee

@Acorn
tell Shine I love her

12:48:21 Acorn (She/Her)

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Shine would like to share that it's her birthday today and she hasn't received her treats yet

Night Raven College

12:47:41 NRC/Raven

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I honestly hate this drawing.

12:43:39 tiger\Owl|she\her

Lol

12:43:27 Sith Happens

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Can she get a paws?

12:42:43 renee

-WP Click- she refuses to give birth </3 96 hours strong

12:37:25 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

why cant I think of boosts I could now I cant XD

12:34:54 Tito

Paw run <3

12:30:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

forgot pm me as im poofing

12:30:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone have good summery ideas for pelts? as I need more XD

12:30:07 Many moons, one me

Andy
Aww, yeah I think he'd like to be inside your skin

12:26:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

That’s what my cat Daisy does.

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01:03:53 ezra, he/him

winter-
ooh that sucks :(

01:02:49 Winter

Dude I bought 10 apples bought ONE relic space it refresh and purchased bought another one now my apples are gone ugh ;-;

01:00:15 ezra, he/him

i should have a muskox character

01:00:12 Acorn (She/Her)

Thankfully this engine isn't too terribly loud - it still hurts though :")

12:57:07 Acorn (She/Her)

Renee
She does indeed lol
She turned 8 today

12:56:06 renee

@Acorn
She knows she's that girl

12:56:03 Acorn (She/Her)

I swear if my neighbor starts up this jet engine while my sensitive young cousin is over >.>

12:50:46 Acorn (She/Her)

Renee
She said meah
Which probably means thank you or who couldn't

Also I love your avatar

12:48:50 renee

@Acorn
tell Shine I love her

12:48:21 Acorn (She/Her)

-Click-
Shine would like to share that it's her birthday today and she hasn't received her treats yet

Night Raven College

12:47:41 NRC/Raven

-Click-

I honestly hate this drawing.

12:43:39 tiger\Owl|she\her

Lol

12:43:27 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Can she get a paws?

12:42:43 renee

-WP Click- she refuses to give birth </3 96 hours strong

12:37:25 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

why cant I think of boosts I could now I cant XD

12:34:54 Tito

Paw run <3

12:30:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

forgot pm me as im poofing

12:30:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone have good summery ideas for pelts? as I need more XD

12:30:07 Many moons, one me

Andy
Aww, yeah I think he'd like to be inside your skin

12:26:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

That’s what my cat Daisy does.

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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