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07:58:48 NRC/Raven

I guessed that

07:58:36 Winter

Raven
Not the boost I wanted lol

Night Raven College

07:58:30 NRC/Raven

Oh

Night Raven College

07:58:18 NRC/Raven

Yuck?

07:57:58 Winter

YUCK -WP Click-

Night Raven College

07:57:07 NRC/Raven

-WP Click-
I love his legs

07:54:40 Sith Happens

Alright, I've got to hop off, see yall later

07:54:19 Sith Happens

Maybe? I dunno, maybe I'm just lucky

07:53:24 Caesar

only one out of four??? insane, considering thats about the same as my good litter rate ;-;

07:52:13 Sith Happens

@cres, I feel like 1 out of 4 litters will be all duds, but that's the chance I have to take...

Night Raven College

07:51:16 NRC/Raven

I log in and the first thing I see is about a curse...

07:51:11 Sith Happens

It's all good winter! Happens to all of us XD

07:50:37 Caesar

noobking, oh my God the green fern curse doesnt work on you?? how does it feel to be Gods favorite

07:50:35 Winter

Anakin
Lmfao i am so stupid

07:50:01 Caesar

LMAO

07:49:43 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Winter, the DH you gave me forever ago, that's Percy

07:49:06 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Then this guy got their emerald eyes :D

07:48:56 Winter

Shot not shit lmao

07:48:51 Winter

I want a shit of Percy whoever he is

07:47:37 Sith Happens

I think I did use green fern.

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Night Raven College

07:58:48 NRC/Raven

I guessed that

07:58:36 Winter

Raven
Not the boost I wanted lol

Night Raven College

07:58:30 NRC/Raven

Oh

Night Raven College

07:58:18 NRC/Raven

Yuck?

07:57:58 Winter

YUCK -WP Click-

Night Raven College

07:57:07 NRC/Raven

-WP Click-
I love his legs

07:54:40 Sith Happens

Alright, I've got to hop off, see yall later

07:54:19 Sith Happens

Maybe? I dunno, maybe I'm just lucky

07:53:24 Caesar

only one out of four??? insane, considering thats about the same as my good litter rate ;-;

07:52:13 Sith Happens

@cres, I feel like 1 out of 4 litters will be all duds, but that's the chance I have to take...

Night Raven College

07:51:16 NRC/Raven

I log in and the first thing I see is about a curse...

07:51:11 Sith Happens

It's all good winter! Happens to all of us XD

07:50:37 Caesar

noobking, oh my God the green fern curse doesnt work on you?? how does it feel to be Gods favorite

07:50:35 Winter

Anakin
Lmfao i am so stupid

07:50:01 Caesar

LMAO

07:49:43 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Winter, the DH you gave me forever ago, that's Percy

07:49:06 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Then this guy got their emerald eyes :D

07:48:56 Winter

Shot not shit lmao

07:48:51 Winter

I want a shit of Percy whoever he is

07:47:37 Sith Happens

I think I did use green fern.

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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