Wolf Play : Critique

11:04:07 Caesar

appraise all button in montak, oh how i love you <3333

11:03:31 Caesar

bird boi, i dont think theyd be worth the price, as long as hearthstones exist :')

11:00:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

Nightlight use the sales chat

10:59:23 Rook

is it crazy to say I wish Lucius sold bronze figs? like am I too greedy for wishing I could use a 3rd currency to get them? xD

nighlight

10:58:20

can anyone buy my wolf

10:57:22 Rook

thank you guys <33 I think he looks so cool. I can't decide what background to give him, though >.<

So many good backgrounds but he doesn't really fit them

10:56:00 Many moons, one me

Sabbath
He looks so pretty!

10:55:55 Caesar

bird boi, all the paws for the pretty dude <33

10:54:10 tiger\Owl|she\her

Bye. I think I’m going somewhere so gotta go! See ya laters!

10:53:32 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

10:52:47 tiger\Owl|she\her

Same

10:52:32 Many moons, one me

Harry kinda looks like my boy Thumbs. Love the Oreo kitties

10:52:11 tiger\Owl|she\her

Again*

10:52:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

Also if I clean his room in about in hour it’s a mess agian

Vax

10:51:59 a rock in your shoe

imma go work, see ya

10:50:52 tiger\Owl|she\her

XD he Murks a LOT

Vax

10:50:11 a rock in your shoe

owl
he speaks only in riddles

10:49:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yeah. Soon I’ll probably have to fix it again

10:48:36 Many moons, one me

Owl
Harry looks like he knows what he did, had a great time and would definitely do it again

10:46:23 tiger\Owl|she\her

His name is Harry. -Click-

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11:04:07 Caesar

appraise all button in montak, oh how i love you <3333

11:03:31 Caesar

bird boi, i dont think theyd be worth the price, as long as hearthstones exist :')

11:00:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

Nightlight use the sales chat

10:59:23 Rook

is it crazy to say I wish Lucius sold bronze figs? like am I too greedy for wishing I could use a 3rd currency to get them? xD

nighlight

10:58:20

can anyone buy my wolf

10:57:22 Rook

thank you guys <33 I think he looks so cool. I can't decide what background to give him, though >.<

So many good backgrounds but he doesn't really fit them

10:56:00 Many moons, one me

Sabbath
He looks so pretty!

10:55:55 Caesar

bird boi, all the paws for the pretty dude <33

10:54:10 tiger\Owl|she\her

Bye. I think I’m going somewhere so gotta go! See ya laters!

10:53:32 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

10:52:47 tiger\Owl|she\her

Same

10:52:32 Many moons, one me

Harry kinda looks like my boy Thumbs. Love the Oreo kitties

10:52:11 tiger\Owl|she\her

Again*

10:52:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

Also if I clean his room in about in hour it’s a mess agian

Vax

10:51:59 a rock in your shoe

imma go work, see ya

10:50:52 tiger\Owl|she\her

XD he Murks a LOT

Vax

10:50:11 a rock in your shoe

owl
he speaks only in riddles

10:49:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yeah. Soon I’ll probably have to fix it again

10:48:36 Many moons, one me

Owl
Harry looks like he knows what he did, had a great time and would definitely do it again

10:46:23 tiger\Owl|she\her

His name is Harry. -Click-

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM