Wolf Play : Critique

02:54:06

savik my wolves change they go from exelent to okey same wolf

02:48:45 Nalavara

Thank you, Eve. <3

02:43:53 evebot

She was active on Saturday. She isn't missing. :)

02:42:07 Nalavara

We are missing her.

02:39:50 evebot

She's been active though.

02:39:20 evebot

Sometimes life comes first.

02:38:41 Nalavara

Eve, do you know why Demon Mistress seems to be MIA?

02:35:59 Nalavara

A bonsaitreasure,
I use Make Friends on any of my wolves that are not excellent. But if I breed any of my excellent rated wolves to an OK/Bad/Very Bad, the pups will be OK or Good.

02:34:38 evebot

She looks really cool!

Sabbath

02:33:28 Rook

she needs some gear on her back but I have no idea what >.<
-WP Click-

02:27:16

hmm why do all my wolfs go from exxellent with pack to good ok??? wierd any help will be apriciated

Lurking shadows

01:48:03

Serpents

12:25:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone know of names that mean fox? if so pm me please (male/unisex)

rotting

11:42:34 rotting

it would be cool to name her something skull related since her tail kinda looks like bones

11:27:00 Kneecap stealer

She kinda has the markings of an okapi

11:25:18 Kneecap stealer

Pretty markings

distant-lands

11:17:05 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
that's a keeper for sure

Moonfall

11:16:51 Many moons, one me

Well, it seems I have no choice. /silly
Goodnight everyone, if you go to sleep at any point while I snooze, I hope you sleep well
and if you're just starting your day or in the middle of it, I hope you have a great rest of your day

11:06:09 Kneecap stealer

Go to sleep or you get the frying pan /joking

11:05:27 Nalavara

Moon, go to sleep. :)

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02:54:06

savik my wolves change they go from exelent to okey same wolf

02:48:45 Nalavara

Thank you, Eve. <3

02:43:53 evebot

She was active on Saturday. She isn't missing. :)

02:42:07 Nalavara

We are missing her.

02:39:50 evebot

She's been active though.

02:39:20 evebot

Sometimes life comes first.

02:38:41 Nalavara

Eve, do you know why Demon Mistress seems to be MIA?

02:35:59 Nalavara

A bonsaitreasure,
I use Make Friends on any of my wolves that are not excellent. But if I breed any of my excellent rated wolves to an OK/Bad/Very Bad, the pups will be OK or Good.

02:34:38 evebot

She looks really cool!

Sabbath

02:33:28 Rook

she needs some gear on her back but I have no idea what >.<
-WP Click-

02:27:16

hmm why do all my wolfs go from exxellent with pack to good ok??? wierd any help will be apriciated

Lurking shadows

01:48:03

Serpents

12:25:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone know of names that mean fox? if so pm me please (male/unisex)

rotting

11:42:34 rotting

it would be cool to name her something skull related since her tail kinda looks like bones

11:27:00 Kneecap stealer

She kinda has the markings of an okapi

11:25:18 Kneecap stealer

Pretty markings

distant-lands

11:17:05 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
that's a keeper for sure

Moonfall

11:16:51 Many moons, one me

11:06:09 Kneecap stealer

Go to sleep or you get the frying pan /joking

11:05:27 Nalavara

Moon, go to sleep. :)

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM