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12:52:50 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Hello??? My twin girls both threw defects for me. Although, they arent that good

12:51:25 Kneecap stealer

Moon

I bought a popping stone, let's see

12:50:41 Kneecap stealer

Hehehehehe 100 mush down the drain let's hope for something good

12:50:02 Kneecap stealer

I screamed the second I saw I got triplets that day

12:49:37 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Did i show off my bald pup yet

12:49:34 Kneecap stealer

I hardly go for talents- mars son looks EXACTLY like his daddy and rivere's son (need a new name for him) looks exactly like his mom

12:48:28 Many moons, one me

And on triplets no less

12:48:12 Many moons, one me

Sleepy kitty, I believe Sapphire and her siblings would beg to differ... 1k talents aren't too shabby

12:46:58 Kneecap stealer

Time to go for 5k mush

12:46:12 Kneecap stealer

After 8 litters she FINALLY makes me proud

12:45:37 Many moons, one me

Pink kitty
Awww that's amazing!

12:45:36

Is Panda markings a head marking?

12:45:12 Many moons, one me

Andy, that is nightmare fuel for almost 2 in the morning (for me at least)

12:44:46 Kneecap stealer

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He looks like his mon

12:44:21 Many moons, one me

Hello pink kitty, what's up?

12:42:10 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Leopard seals scare me so much

-Click-

12:41:18 Many moons, one me

Sleep well

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Serpents
Lol

12:31:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

okay Im off as its late I need to start just drawing or something then head off to sleep

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12:53:08 Kneecap stealer

We GoT tRiPlEtS aGaIn

12:52:50 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Hello??? My twin girls both threw defects for me. Although, they arent that good

12:51:25 Kneecap stealer

Moon

I bought a popping stone, let's see

12:50:41 Kneecap stealer

Hehehehehe 100 mush down the drain let's hope for something good

12:50:02 Kneecap stealer

I screamed the second I saw I got triplets that day

12:49:37 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Did i show off my bald pup yet

12:49:34 Kneecap stealer

I hardly go for talents- mars son looks EXACTLY like his daddy and rivere's son (need a new name for him) looks exactly like his mom

12:48:28 Many moons, one me

And on triplets no less

12:48:12 Many moons, one me

Sleepy kitty, I believe Sapphire and her siblings would beg to differ... 1k talents aren't too shabby

12:46:58 Kneecap stealer

Time to go for 5k mush

12:46:12 Kneecap stealer

After 8 litters she FINALLY makes me proud

12:45:37 Many moons, one me

Pink kitty
Awww that's amazing!

12:45:36

Is Panda markings a head marking?

12:45:12 Many moons, one me

Andy, that is nightmare fuel for almost 2 in the morning (for me at least)

12:44:46 Kneecap stealer

-WP Click-
He looks like his mon

12:44:21 Many moons, one me

Hello pink kitty, what's up?

12:42:10 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Leopard seals scare me so much

-Click-

12:41:18 Many moons, one me

Sleep well

12:41:12 Many moons, one me

Serpents
Lol

12:31:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

okay Im off as its late I need to start just drawing or something then head off to sleep

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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