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Vah
What song?
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I'm getting extremely sleepy. If any of you play the Pack Life mini game, may you PM me what they say please? I'm hunting various ones right now, but too much to list at the moment. Thank you in advance to anyone who helps. Goodnight chat.
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Ollie

Thanks!

It's... it's so not his usual color but oh man it fits with the song--
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*Vah
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Nah
That is so cool! :D
I love the red lighting
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Thoughts, should I keep the Sv's and have some Sv's for dom?
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Snake

XD the arms yes. Arms are fun to do--

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Vah*
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Amazing!
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Vah
oOh :o big scythe, awesome art, red
also arms
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Ooooh daaang that looks sick
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okkk im going to bed before i get distracted again
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cinn
so it is :0 thank youu
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Tern
its called a toggle button :D
im storing that info for later
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Oh my stars

This is going to be like the first piece with Quill and blood (ish) that isn't his own--

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 Faulty Demons
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Vah
What song?
 Kháos
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I'm getting extremely sleepy. If any of you play the Pack Life mini game, may you PM me what they say please? I'm hunting various ones right now, but too much to list at the moment. Thank you in advance to anyone who helps. Goodnight chat.
 Zeraphia
12:26:30 Captain / Vah
Ollie

Thanks!

It's... it's so not his usual color but oh man it fits with the song--
 Faulty Demons
12:25:10 Ollie, Gold
*Vah
 Faulty Demons
12:25:02 Ollie, Gold
Nah
That is so cool! :D
I love the red lighting
 TeaBear
12:22:18 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13
Thoughts, should I keep the Sv's and have some Sv's for dom?
 ZefhyrMaracaibo
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HUH?
 Zeraphia
12:07:53 Captain / Vah
Snake

XD the arms yes. Arms are fun to do--

Siren

Thanks!
 Sir3n
12:07:50 Sirens Alluring
Vah*
Autocorrect
 Sir3n
12:07:30 Sirens Alluring
Nah
Amazing!
 snake
12:06:44 
Vah
oOh :o big scythe, awesome art, red
also arms
 Zeraphia
12:04:23 Captain / Vah
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What do we think??
 LIFC_Official
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Welcome to LIFC
we are now looking for Butterflies!
Do you what it takes to enter the garden?
Are you a missing piece of The Spectrum?
 Sir3n
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-WP Click-

Paws?
 Zeraphia
11:45:24 Captain / Vah
Ollie

Ooooh daaang that looks sick
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Thoughts? :)
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11:26:02 Cinn / Ace
okkk im going to bed before i get distracted again
 Eye of Eternity
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cinn
so it is :0 thank youu
 Cinnamon Bloom
11:25:01 Cinn / Ace
Tern
its called a toggle button :D
im storing that info for later
 Zeraphia
11:24:56 Captain / Vah
Oh my stars

This is going to be like the first piece with Quill and blood (ish) that isn't his own--




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Critique?August 8, 2018 02:05 PM


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I'm looking for a critique on this. I made the character for Cun :p
I'm looking for critiques on mostly anatomy, but coloring as well.

https://s15.postimg.cc/p5ekn64l5/sketch1533754368467.png

Edited at August 8, 2018 04:01 PM by Wolf~Song
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:08 PM


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The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:10 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

Thank you! This is super helpful because I didn't notice that! I'll use more references next time :3
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:13 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:15 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:33 PM


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Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:34 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:


Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.

Thank you! I really appreciate it. I can hardly do domestic cats, so I feel you XD
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:42 PM


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Overall I think you did a good job. c:
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:45 PM


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Cún. said:
Overall I think you did a good job. c:

Thanks! ^.^

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