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03:00:57

Yea I don’t mind spending money buttttt SEVEN BUCKS for only 5 spaces is bitttt much

A bonsaitreasure

02:59:22

yeaha i dont want to spend the real money :)

02:49:14

I’m actually gonna crash 7 Australian dollarie doos for only 5 more wolf spaces? ✌️🥹

A bonsaitreasure

02:38:24

anyone tel me what is the best way to get 8 more apples for more den space? or premium and whaat would you pick first den space or premium

02:12:05 Axan hoarder

Need more people
-WP Click-

01:52:01 Kneecap stealer

I need to check on my other accounts lnao

01:49:35 Andy/Kait [he/they]

He's certainly an odd fellow

01:48:15 Kneecap stealer

1073/1900 mush

01:47:50 Kneecap stealer

He's weird

01:46:33 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-Click- he's fully asleep but his eyes are slightly open and rolled back😭

01:44:34 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I cant get a video of him snoring (because i don't know how to share videos on here) but ill snap a picture of him sleeping with his eyes open

01:43:44 Kneecap stealer

Picture or it didn't happen

01:43:13 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Dude my dog is snoring with his eyes OPEN, im crying

01:38:25 Kneecap stealer

Lmao

01:35:36 Silv, Via

I think this is my new record
You have 45 Wishbone(s) to give

01:18:23 Kneecap stealer

I offer various payment methods for wolves ^_^

01:14:05 Kneecap stealer

I just used my pop figurine on her, we can sort out the price in dms

01:13:26

2k!! I’m to poor

01:11:50 Kneecap stealer

FUCK..I forgot he was 2k mush,after orchid petal pops we can work something out in dms for her

01:10:10

I need to get more space for all these wolfies I want

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03:00:57

Yea I don’t mind spending money buttttt SEVEN BUCKS for only 5 spaces is bitttt much

A bonsaitreasure

02:59:22

yeaha i dont want to spend the real money :)

02:49:14

I’m actually gonna crash 7 Australian dollarie doos for only 5 more wolf spaces? ✌️🥹

A bonsaitreasure

02:38:24

anyone tel me what is the best way to get 8 more apples for more den space? or premium and whaat would you pick first den space or premium

02:12:05 Axan hoarder

Need more people
-WP Click-

01:52:01 Kneecap stealer

I need to check on my other accounts lnao

01:49:35 Andy/Kait [he/they]

He's certainly an odd fellow

01:48:15 Kneecap stealer

1073/1900 mush

01:47:50 Kneecap stealer

He's weird

01:46:33 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-Click- he's fully asleep but his eyes are slightly open and rolled back😭

01:44:34 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I cant get a video of him snoring (because i don't know how to share videos on here) but ill snap a picture of him sleeping with his eyes open

01:43:44 Kneecap stealer

Picture or it didn't happen

01:43:13 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Dude my dog is snoring with his eyes OPEN, im crying

01:38:25 Kneecap stealer

Lmao

01:35:36 Silv, Via

I think this is my new record
You have 45 Wishbone(s) to give

01:18:23 Kneecap stealer

I offer various payment methods for wolves ^_^

01:14:05 Kneecap stealer

I just used my pop figurine on her, we can sort out the price in dms

01:13:26

2k!! I’m to poor

01:11:50 Kneecap stealer

FUCK..I forgot he was 2k mush,after orchid petal pops we can work something out in dms for her

01:10:10

I need to get more space for all these wolfies I want

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

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November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

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November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

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November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

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January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

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January 3, 2018 03:49 AM

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Aww so cool!

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