Wolf Play : Critique?

Jester
I meant keep or sell is not allowed. There are other versions like keep or no, keep or retire.

You used the textspeak for the word 'I don't know' instead of spelling it out

Doodle Dragon

09:37:15 He/They pronouns

Dawn,
Aw that sucks ToT

Black Dawn Den

09:36:46 Dawn

OMG my wolves are both 86 hours pregnant and not in labor yet ugh.

Jester

09:36:30

What text speak did I do and I wasn't selling it?

Feiella

09:35:04 Pack of Sharp Snap

Also yes keep and sell is not allowed in main chat.

Doodle Dragon

09:34:13 He/They pronouns

Oh, never mind, textspeak

Doodle Dragon

09:34:01 He/They pronouns

Jester,
I'm pretty sure it's because the sell part, that would be considered advertising :p

Feiella

09:33:56 Pack of Sharp Snap

Jester
Please spell out your words. The only textspeak allowed are lol, omg, oml, lmao and irl

Jester

09:33:21

Why's my message keep disappearing on my screen

Doodle Dragon

09:32:01 He/They pronouns

Jester,
Keep

Jester

09:31:16

Fits the*

Doodle Dragon

09:30:11 He/They pronouns

The coat in the news looks like the peppermint coat :p

Feiella

09:28:12 Pack of Sharp Snap

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Jester

09:42:59

Kinda wish they'd add a value chat to discuss stuff I. Find forums annoying to read

Feiella

09:42:52 Pack of Sharp Snap

enjoy school

Oze-heart Pack

09:42:01

Hi I’m new going to school

Feiella

09:41:45 Pack of Sharp Snap

Alright so apparently I still have 111 wolves with the name Snap still alive.

Yeah I don't think they plan on leaving me for a long time lol

Doodle Dragon

09:41:19 He/They pronouns

I feel like I need to add more >.>

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09:40:35 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

@Demon thanks and sorry poffed to just stair at stuff and nice sounds fun :D

Jester

09:40:03

Keep doing that out of habit ;-;

Feiella

09:38:37 Pack of Sharp Snap

Jester
I meant keep or sell is not allowed. There are other versions like keep or no, keep or retire.

You used the textspeak for the word 'I don't know' instead of spelling it out

Doodle Dragon

09:37:15 He/They pronouns

Dawn,
Aw that sucks ToT

Black Dawn Den

09:36:46 Dawn

OMG my wolves are both 86 hours pregnant and not in labor yet ugh.

Jester

09:36:30

What text speak did I do and I wasn't selling it?

Feiella

09:35:04 Pack of Sharp Snap

Also yes keep and sell is not allowed in main chat.

Doodle Dragon

09:34:13 He/They pronouns

Oh, never mind, textspeak

Doodle Dragon

09:34:01 He/They pronouns

Jester,
I'm pretty sure it's because the sell part, that would be considered advertising :p

Feiella

09:33:56 Pack of Sharp Snap

Jester
Please spell out your words. The only textspeak allowed are lol, omg, oml, lmao and irl

Jester

09:33:21

Why's my message keep disappearing on my screen

Doodle Dragon

09:32:01 He/They pronouns

Jester,
Keep

Jester

09:31:16

Fits the*

Doodle Dragon

09:30:11 He/They pronouns

The coat in the news looks like the peppermint coat :p

Feiella

09:28:12 Pack of Sharp Snap

Serpents
Happy birthday to you!

I'm alright. Wrapping up some presents, being on here, working on poems and coloring in some coffee coasters my mum got me for Christmas last year XD

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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