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Click on Realm, then Marketplace. You will see the Full Moon Celebration Shop. The moon flowers are the *money* for purchasing the goods in the FMC shop.

02:48:43 Winter

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Menu > marketplace > full moon celebration shop

02:47:45 Winter

Renne
Moon towers are little items you can spend in the fmc shop you can buy many things with them . You can get them from howling wrestling exploring ect

02:47:32 Nalavara

YAY!!!!!

02:46:23

I found the damnn thing!

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When the mods come online they can help you.

lovrenee

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What are moon flowers and what do I do with them?

02:35:10 Nalavara

I had problems with a single square that was not where the map said it was. It took me over a half hour to find that single square.

02:31:34

Guys how do I change my pack picture

02:15:39

I can’t get to it because of the stupid lines up have to stay on

02:15:13

I do but it’s no helpppp

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Do you have an explorer's map?

moonlight_luminary

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I just sent a score in slither... ;-; it's literally zero–

01:45:52

I can’t find this dang last eme,y on Level 3 of the forest

Moonfall

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I'm going to go make a cocoon and burrow now. I am currently able to feel my skin

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I just found a great deal on some cups $8 per cup and there's 4 cups

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What did I just read...

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM