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Pea
Funny thing is ok having homemade pizza tomorrow for supper at my aunts house with shepherds pie ( yes I'm staying with my aunt for 3 days and she has a toddler)

Owlstar

10:29:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

Chat I’ve had braces for a while. Think I’m getting them off this year. Either august or October. No real idea when

MoonBound

10:29:04 Moon, MJ

@Owlstar
Lmao xD

The Aura's

10:28:59 Aura/Pea

NRC
I know 😭 he is ugly
Maybe I can fix that wait a sec...

Night Raven College

10:28:36 NRC/Night/Raven

Owl
Lol😂😂

Owlstar

10:28:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

Pea, me and my brother ALWAYS fight over that seat. But I always win. Here’s why
1im stronger
2hes a wimp
3i have a soul piercing stare
4i can be very threatening when I want to be.
5im just all round better

The Aura's

10:28:07 Aura/Pea

NRC
Ooh! I want pizza!

** eating virtual price of pizza🍕**

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10:33:20 Aura/Pea

-WP Click- NRC
I think this fixed him ☺

Night Raven College

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Then*

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10:32:59 NRC/Night/Raven

I'm not stubborn because if I am i get in more trouble the it's worth...

Eye of Eternity

10:32:24 tern | they/he

owlstar
fair i guess :'3

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10:32:10 Aura/Pea

Owl
I'm stubborn too! lol
Just I'm not 6 feet tall xD

Owlstar

10:31:23 tiger\Owl|she\her

Tern I just hog it because I can

Owlstar

10:31:02 tiger\Owl|she\her

Pea. I am also very stubborn. So that helps too

The Aura's

10:30:56 Aura/Pea

NRC
XD lol

Night Raven College

10:30:45 NRC/Night/Raven

I have a older sister and a younger sister.

Eye of Eternity

10:30:40 tern | they/he

owlstar
why not one of you gets the window on the way there and the other gets it on the way back
thats what my brother and i do

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10:30:26 Aura/Pea

Owl
XD
I wish that was the same for me...I have three older brothers 😭
I can't win unless my father gives me a seat by the window xD

Night Raven College

10:30:13 NRC/Night/Raven

Night Raven College

10:30:10 NRC/Night/Raven

I'm not ok

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10:30:03 NRC/Night/Raven

Pea
Funny thing is ok having homemade pizza tomorrow for supper at my aunts house with shepherds pie ( yes I'm staying with my aunt for 3 days and she has a toddler)

Owlstar

10:29:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

Chat I’ve had braces for a while. Think I’m getting them off this year. Either august or October. No real idea when

MoonBound

10:29:04 Moon, MJ

@Owlstar
Lmao xD

The Aura's

10:28:59 Aura/Pea

NRC
I know 😭 he is ugly
Maybe I can fix that wait a sec...

Night Raven College

10:28:36 NRC/Night/Raven

Owl
Lol😂😂

Owlstar

10:28:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

The Aura's

10:28:07 Aura/Pea

NRC
Ooh! I want pizza!

** eating virtual price of pizza🍕**

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Galaxy Help

April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

Galaxy Help

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Galaxy Help

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

Galaxy Help

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

a m b e r

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

Galaxy Help

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

Galaxy Help

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM