Wolf Play : Critique

01:13:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click- getting old :(

01:12:37 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Cae
That's awesome <3
I'm doing good! I've just been insanely busy as of recent :') Surviving is probably the kindest word for it lmao

01:11:57 tiger\Owl|she\her

I think I’m just to lazy to move her…

01:11:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

No idea why I didn’t already put the pregnant girl in the folder to hide away…she’s just sitting out there…

01:10:08

@lovrenee
Well, not a video, but site W3Schools for html and css might help? They cover a lot of stuff, so just pick and choose some things that seem useful.

01:10:05 renee

@Caesar
I'll check it out, thank you!

01:09:18 tiger\Owl|she\her

Kinda wish I had Ruby eye dye right now. It would look so good on my little demon king

01:09:18 Many moons, one me

Why is the red bead 1000 mush? That's ridiculous

01:08:46 Caesar

fern, doing good, thanks! just grinding the last 60ish shamrocks for the trophy :') hows you, love? surviving the semester?

01:08:19 Caesar

not a video but a website: w3schools has A LOT of info on css ^^

01:07:34 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Cae!! <333
How are you?

01:07:20 tiger\Owl|she\her

I have a geode but no apple.

01:06:54 renee

lowkey thinking of learning the codes to make my own palette, anybody know of any helpful videos on it?

01:05:12

Just bought Fool's Gold hehehe
See you soon Bree >:3

01:04:25 Caesar

they are new for sure <.<

fern <33

01:02:56 Many moons, one me

Huh 🤷

01:00:29 Fern|Kinz|(her)

They're definitely new
-an explore addict that goes through herbs like money

01:00:24 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click- i should have put more CP on him when he was a pup :')

12:59:43 Many moons, one me

Unless I'm just have some sort of Mandela effect

Eye of Eternity

12:59:42 tern | they/he

moonfall
i swear they didnt used to be there

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01:13:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click- getting old :(

01:12:37 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Cae
That's awesome <3
I'm doing good! I've just been insanely busy as of recent :') Surviving is probably the kindest word for it lmao

01:11:57 tiger\Owl|she\her

I think I’m just to lazy to move her…

01:11:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

No idea why I didn’t already put the pregnant girl in the folder to hide away…she’s just sitting out there…

01:10:08

@lovrenee
Well, not a video, but site W3Schools for html and css might help? They cover a lot of stuff, so just pick and choose some things that seem useful.

01:10:05 renee

@Caesar
I'll check it out, thank you!

01:09:18 tiger\Owl|she\her

Kinda wish I had Ruby eye dye right now. It would look so good on my little demon king

01:09:18 Many moons, one me

Why is the red bead 1000 mush? That's ridiculous

01:08:46 Caesar

fern, doing good, thanks! just grinding the last 60ish shamrocks for the trophy :') hows you, love? surviving the semester?

01:08:19 Caesar

not a video but a website: w3schools has A LOT of info on css ^^

01:07:34 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Cae!! <333
How are you?

01:07:20 tiger\Owl|she\her

I have a geode but no apple.

01:06:54 renee

lowkey thinking of learning the codes to make my own palette, anybody know of any helpful videos on it?

01:05:12

Just bought Fool's Gold hehehe
See you soon Bree >:3

01:04:25 Caesar

they are new for sure <.<

fern <33

01:02:56 Many moons, one me

Huh 🤷

01:00:29 Fern|Kinz|(her)

They're definitely new
-an explore addict that goes through herbs like money

01:00:24 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click- i should have put more CP on him when he was a pup :')

12:59:43 Many moons, one me

Unless I'm just have some sort of Mandela effect

Eye of Eternity

12:59:42 tern | they/he

moonfall
i swear they didnt used to be there

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM