Wolf Play : Critique?

01:13:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click- getting old :(

01:12:37 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Cae
That's awesome <3
I'm doing good! I've just been insanely busy as of recent :') Surviving is probably the kindest word for it lmao

01:11:57 tiger\Owl|she\her

I think I’m just to lazy to move her…

01:11:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

No idea why I didn’t already put the pregnant girl in the folder to hide away…she’s just sitting out there…

01:10:08

@lovrenee
Well, not a video, but site W3Schools for html and css might help? They cover a lot of stuff, so just pick and choose some things that seem useful.

01:10:05 renee

@Caesar
I'll check it out, thank you!

01:09:18 tiger\Owl|she\her

Kinda wish I had Ruby eye dye right now. It would look so good on my little demon king

01:09:18 Many moons, one me

Why is the red bead 1000 mush? That's ridiculous

01:08:46 Caesar

fern, doing good, thanks! just grinding the last 60ish shamrocks for the trophy :') hows you, love? surviving the semester?

01:08:19 Caesar

not a video but a website: w3schools has A LOT of info on css ^^

01:07:34 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Cae!! <333
How are you?

01:07:20 tiger\Owl|she\her

I have a geode but no apple.

01:06:54 renee

lowkey thinking of learning the codes to make my own palette, anybody know of any helpful videos on it?

01:05:12

Just bought Fool's Gold hehehe
See you soon Bree >:3

01:04:25 Caesar

they are new for sure <.<

fern <33

01:02:56 Many moons, one me

Huh 🤷

01:00:29 Fern|Kinz|(her)

They're definitely new
-an explore addict that goes through herbs like money

01:00:24 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click- i should have put more CP on him when he was a pup :')

12:59:43 Many moons, one me

Unless I'm just have some sort of Mandela effect

Eye of Eternity

12:59:42 tern | they/he

moonfall
i swear they didnt used to be there

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01:13:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click- getting old :(

01:12:37 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Cae
That's awesome <3
I'm doing good! I've just been insanely busy as of recent :') Surviving is probably the kindest word for it lmao

01:11:57 tiger\Owl|she\her

I think I’m just to lazy to move her…

01:11:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

No idea why I didn’t already put the pregnant girl in the folder to hide away…she’s just sitting out there…

01:10:08

@lovrenee
Well, not a video, but site W3Schools for html and css might help? They cover a lot of stuff, so just pick and choose some things that seem useful.

01:10:05 renee

@Caesar
I'll check it out, thank you!

01:09:18 tiger\Owl|she\her

Kinda wish I had Ruby eye dye right now. It would look so good on my little demon king

01:09:18 Many moons, one me

Why is the red bead 1000 mush? That's ridiculous

01:08:46 Caesar

fern, doing good, thanks! just grinding the last 60ish shamrocks for the trophy :') hows you, love? surviving the semester?

01:08:19 Caesar

not a video but a website: w3schools has A LOT of info on css ^^

01:07:34 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Cae!! <333
How are you?

01:07:20 tiger\Owl|she\her

I have a geode but no apple.

01:06:54 renee

lowkey thinking of learning the codes to make my own palette, anybody know of any helpful videos on it?

01:05:12

Just bought Fool's Gold hehehe
See you soon Bree >:3

01:04:25 Caesar

they are new for sure <.<

fern <33

01:02:56 Many moons, one me

Huh 🤷

01:00:29 Fern|Kinz|(her)

They're definitely new
-an explore addict that goes through herbs like money

01:00:24 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click- i should have put more CP on him when he was a pup :')

12:59:43 Many moons, one me

Unless I'm just have some sort of Mandela effect

Eye of Eternity

12:59:42 tern | they/he

moonfall
i swear they didnt used to be there

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM