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10:25:51 I am on Wolflocke ok

My whole arm hurts and this isn't even halfway done :,)
-Click-

10:25:48 Reaper / Grim

Somehow I cut my foot open, we're all good :3

10:25:39 I'm watching You

I'm not getting any mush from alliance battles for some reason

10:24:53 Stray is neglected.

Kryuk,

...

I'll get back to you.

10:24:18 Exist / Kuskyn

-WP Click-
I can't even with you wolf party xD

10:23:13 Reaper / Grim

Exist
You got this

Daze
:D Dumplings! Oh shit I have blood pouring out of... somewhere, give me a minute XD

10:22:42 Exist / Kuskyn

-WP Click-
Hero feather child defect go figure ;-;

10:21:53 Stray is neglected.

Kryuk,

This is fucked. You are not supposed to act like this. Fear me! I will... uh.. throw dumplings at your window!

..I don't know. Please save me.

10:21:22

Anyone willing to watch some of my preggo wolves for me..?

10:21:13 Exist / Kuskyn

Reaper time to try and get a good female boost xD

10:21:00 I Am Vengeance

Should I stay with black and purple or should I do black and some other color

10:20:48 Reaper / Grim

Daze
Because I'm the opposite of scared of you. Did you forget you are a bestie?

Exist
XD Nice

10:20:01 Exist / Kuskyn

Reaper I am sitting at 27K and I was like "Maybe I can make myself another pretty boy" xD

10:19:51

Hellooooo chat

10:19:40 Stray is neglected.

Kryuk,

Dammit, how did you turn this situation on me -

10:19:29 Frozen - Mist

Existence,
o-o Well damn hes nice.

10:19:18 Reaper / Grim

Exist
Damn, WP kick in?

10:18:22 Exist / Kuskyn

-WP Click-
Hello o.o

10:18:14 Reaper / Grim

Daze
You know where I'm at, bring it on and I'll cook some decent food for y'all

10:17:04 Stray is neglected.

Kryuk,

Ha, I suppose you're right.

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Isle of Gold - Comments

March 23, 2024 10:21 PM

Lightbringer

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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323

Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:36 PM

Darkseeker

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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:37 PM

Lightbringer

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OH Geez XD

well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3

imma... go eat dinner. XD

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March 24, 2024 05:51 PM

Darkseeker

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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.

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March 24, 2024 08:33 PM

Lightbringer

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I'm glad! I remember reading somewhere a long time ago that when someone new speaks, you put in a new paragraph. Since I've wanted to be an author I picked up the habit and haven't let it go since!

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