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Darkseeker
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Alright ^^ Might get started on my Will post now then!
Thanks! Glad you like it, I feel like I'm sometimes struggling to portray it in a good way though... Idk, she's hard, I typically don't do female characters because overall I find them harder and then her personality is quite unlike many of my others so I'm trying to still figure it out
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Lightbringer
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Slicker and Lucile need to support each other and get over their addictions together! :D Esther post was really good! Kinda want to keep Nike alive just so Esther and Nike can talk again in the future. Oooo! I found a good reasource a while back that made me better at writing women. I don't know where it is, but I will try to find it!
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Neutral
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They definitely should! :D I could see them both getting along pretty well, they're a bit similar! - Nike coming back after everyone thinks shes dead would be super fun I think! :) - Oo, I might wanna see that too! :o When I first started roleplaying I always roleplayed male because everybody always wanted to play female XD I've had a good share of both though! - Edit: Finished a Lucile post! Edited at May 18, 2023 07:48 PM by Black_Sand
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Lightbringer
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Slicker and Lucile should absolutely meet up at some point! Good Lucile post too by the way! Now I am just worried about how they will all travel since Esther has her horse and Lucile has hers but there are no others- Oh and here are some videos and comments I had on said videos! I will look for more later but these are good places to start! For starters though, I kinda like some of the things this first one shares,but it is also kinda rude and accusatory as if expecting you to be a rude male viewer instead of someone who is trying to better themselves at writing women. Other than this (and the FUCKING Bechdal Test) it has some great information! (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HaMfzseZLcY) I genuinely love this next creator and some of the things he produces because the stuff he writes on women is really good and I agree with him on basically all of it. He also shows good examples of good and bad writing so you know what to do and what not to do. I am doing two of his videos because both of them are pretty good even if only one focuses solely on writing women. ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HcPY_Pzftl0, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9nO_JQ1_6vw)
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Darkseeker
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Esther's blood would start boiling if she saw Nike come back when she thought the woman was dead xD
Oh thank you! ^^ I'll check them out later!
Also as for the horse problem maybe a dead gang members horse is still around camp and Vera could borrow that one? (Just not Jacob's horse because I think Esther might kill her then xD) Edited at May 19, 2023 01:38 AM by Roaw
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Darkseeker
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Will post is up and my boy is once again acting jealous because why not?
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Lightbringer
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"I lived, bitch" ooo that is smart actually!! Problem solved then!!! :D Will doesn't even want Slicker looking at anyone else, that's how jealous the man is- Slicker is going to have to do quite a bit for William just so Slicker doesn't have to sleep on the floor too...
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Darkseeker
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She feels so threatened by Nike but no way she'll admit that xD
Will is so jealous when it comes to Slicker but same there, dude won't admit that xD
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Hey, I wont be on all the rest of the day! Got a feild trip to go on :D - William's jealously gets better with every post! I'll try and start on a Roxie post but it might not get too far till Sunday! - I hate when people just assume you're some guy whos just bad at writing women. I know a lot of women who can't even write women >-> But thanks for the video suggestions! I might watch a few of those tommorrow while on my long car ride
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Lightbringer
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Nike genuinely sees Esther as a sweet child, but she still disapproves of her aggression so we will see how these two interact when they meet again- aw but good luck on your field trip!! hope you are having fun!! take your time on posting by the way because I know I will be a bit busy this week- yeah, it is so annoying, but hopefully you find them useful! :D
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