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Also, hey, decided to update the list of all the short stories I've written that you could write from your characters' POVs lmao Mostly just because I am absolutely shocked with the amount I have managed to write. Also because I decided I needed to take a tiny little break lol While I was going through pages I stumbled on Nico's Unraveling song lyric thing again and it made me think of It Was a Swift Not a Swallow (I Never Listen) by Crywank for like... Garvin and his crumbling mental state/relationships with the polycule to varying degrees in T8P 2.0 Might do a short story for the break-up/him going back to Fintan in that actually... Curses, my brain is thinking too much about new story ideas now. I still have so much to write of River Pactolus ;-; Anyways, have the updated list! - the extremely long hair dye thing that doesn’t have a name. Pg 523, AFCS. Your characters; Akira, Ingall, Nico. the shower thing that doesn’t have a name. Pg 520, AFCS. Your characters; Akira. Technically you could try and write for someone else. In The Air. Pg 559, AFCS. Your characters; Akira. Nightmare, Akira Edition - 1. Pg 549, AFCS. Your characters; Akira, Ingall, Nico. Polaris Chat. Pg 541, AFCS. Your characters; Ingall. Technically you could try and write for someone else. Calling It Quits. Pg 486, AFCS. Your characters; Akira. Technically you could try and write for someone else. Too Little Too Late, Prequel to - The Weight of Worlds. Pg 585, AFCS AU. Your characters; Briar. Technically you could try and write for someone else. Smile For The Camera!. Pg 589, AFCS. Your characters; Akira, Ingall, Nico. Price Of Love. Pg 592, AFCS. Your characters; Nico. Technically you could try and write for someone else. Boiling Point. Pg 598, AFCS. Your characters; Akira, Ingall, and Nico. Technically. Crash Bang. Pg 603, AFCS. Your characters; Akira. Technically you could try and write for someone else. Phrygia. Pg 620, AFCS AU. Your characters; Akira, Briar, Karma, and Kostas. River Pactolus, Part 1 - The News. Pg 645, AFCS AU(?). Your characters; Akira, Ingall, and Nico. River Pactolus, Part 2 - Midas. Pg 645, AFCS AU(?). Your characters; Nico. River Pactolus, Part 3 - Akira. Pg 645, AFCS AU(?). Your characters; Akira. River Pactolus, Part 4 - Ingall. Pg 649, AFCS AU(?). Your characters; Ingall. |
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I feel so bad ~400 words into the Revan snippet and Garvin's doing better than he is during every other snippet. But I also know that this is the snippet where he ends up remembering the news. So despite the happiness at the moment... It's not going to last. It's only going to be long enough to make you wish it would last. |
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Due to election results, I have decided to take a break from all the angst I'm writing with River Pactolus (things are going to get bad in it and there's enough of that shit already) Sooo instead I'm going to write some hurt/comfort with Garvin and Aries. Maybe a whole collection of hurt/comfort with Garvin and Aries. Just so that everything isn't as terrible. |
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Nice, I'll post an updated one as well, though probably after I finish my new story because I don't think I have much more, lol - I love that, yeah, that's why I took so long to respond, I've been so stressed the past couple of days, lmao My pain has kinda seeped into my writing though, and poor Akira is getting the bulk of it- Though I also have a vague idea for some fluff (or at least hurt/comfort) as well, so we'll see, haha |
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Actually, speaking of, I have a question because poor Garvin may accidentally get some correlational angst here as well, oops- Ummm So, say Akira's mom got in contact somehow and basically apologized and said she wanted to reconnect, how would Garvin react to that initially? Like, would that be triggering for him at all? |
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Oh wait, one other question as well because I found a fluffy song that I'm dying to do now- Who would you say ends up being Revan's closest friend outside of the polycule in the future of AFCS? |
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Sounds good! - Yeahhh I got in the sudden mood for hurt/comfort with Aries and Garvin because of it oops Do we want Aries comforting Garvin first or Garvin comforting Aries first? I have ideas for both lmao - Very excited for your new story- Hmmm Garvin would, at the very least, try and act like it didn't bother him. Really, he'd be happy for Akira. That's great, after all. So long as she isn't terrible and all. Which, okay, yeah, he'd be a little worried about that at first. A little resentful of her on Akira's behalf for a little. But like... Not to the point of it being obvious. If that makes any sense. If she turns out to be really cool and nice and just... Great. Yeah, okay, yeah. He'd be a little upset. I don't know if it'd be triggering. It'd more so be the fact that he wouldn't bring it up or talk about it that would end up being triggering for him. Because he wouldn't really be processing it. Any emotions he has about it wouldn't really be thought about. He doesn't want to think about it or how it'd be affecting him lmao |
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As for Revan's bestie outside of the polycule? That's hard to say given that he doesn't actually tend to make friends I'd honestly either say Simon or Kostas though. Simon and him are actually going to end up 'kind of friends' (which is besties in Revan's speak) before Simon's villain arc and all. But overall, he does tend to let himself get closer to people that seem like they won't get close to him either. So. Kostas and Simon are probably the best choices there |
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I love that, Aries and Garvin are amazing and I love their friendship, lol And hmmmm, both are awesome, so whichever is easier for you to write If you really can't decide though, I guess Aries comforting Garvin? God knows he needs it lately XD - Okay, I kind of figured- Does it change things if Akira's first reaction is to break down? Because my guy is not doing well for a while there, lmao Side note though, we get some solid Akira and Revan hurt/comfort content in the second part of the story, which is great, lol - Alright! It doesn't matter too much, they're just vaguely mentioned, haha I'll have the fluff up in a sec since I've just gotta plug in names then :) |
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Song: The Most Beautiful Thing by Thomas Headon. (With some adjustments to the lyrics to better fit the characters and avoid as much repeating in some spots) Characters; Nico, Akira, Revan, Ingall, and Garvin. Simon, Everett, Briar, Aries, and Sol mentioned. Context; Just the polycule being absolutely smitten for each other. Takes place in the far future of AFCS under the assumption that Sol goes back to the good side and his and Ingall's friendship grows again. Same with Simon and Revan :) Yeah, this song is literally just the polycule ranting about their partners to their besties/family, lol Enjoy the fluff! :D --- Garvin, casually rambling to Aries, about Nico: "She lays her head on me while he falls asleep..." Garvin, smiling slightly while Aries watches with a mixture of amusement and understanding, about Akria: "They gently close their eyes. In the night they're perfect though I can't even see." Garvin, about Revan: "I wouldn't change him at all, no matter how much we fight." Garvin, about Ingall: "I think I could stare into his eyes and fall in love again every time..." *Jumping to Ingall and Sol* Ingall, who still struggles to express himself, but is just genuinely trying to convey his adoration to Sol while they watch in amusement: "'Cause they remains to be the most beautiful thing I've ever seen..." *Now to Nico and Briar* Nico, smirking slightly as they speak to Briar, about Revan and Akira: "They're always humming my songs, though they can't get them right..." Nico, smile softening, about Ingall and Garving: "I like the way they talk about their interests, the world doesn't deserve their minds..." *To Revan and Simon* Revan, smiling faintly as he speaks to Simon, about the polycule as a whole: "I spoke about them to my mom. I said "you'll meet them some time." I told her that I'm in love, 'cause I get butterflies..." *To Akira and Everett* Akira, speaking in absolute adoration while Everett watches with affection and honest relief, about the polycule as a whole: "And they remain to be the most beautiful thing I've ever seen, 'cause they are still to me the most beautiful thing I've ever seen..." *And finally just all of them being idiots in love, lmao* All of the polycule, unknowingly all gushing over each other to their friends, lol: "'Cause they will always be the most beautiful thing I've ever seen." |
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