Also, the updated version is in my blog if you wanna check it out-

I posted it in chat for some opinions and someone that had already read it had continued to read the rest of the bad unedited mess that is my blog and just complimented me so many times-
I'm struggling-

If they like it, then that's good! Their compliments are valid, you know ^^

And I'll go ahead and read it -

NNnnO-
I almost did the jibberish- AH-
I know they're valid- but it makes me feel- mushy and happy and proud and tears of joy and I don't know how to deal with that-

Then I will drown you in more compliments >:) (all true, mind you)

Your writing is incredible, for one. That's obvious, from the description to the emotion in your pieces, it's stunning. Secondly, I mean, your art - that's pretty awesome too. And then just you as a person - you're funny, kind, concerningly insane, and an awesome friend, so yes I'm going to compliment you and you can't stop me -

I will explode-

this is bad for my health- smiling hurts my cheeks and pain is bad for the human body which means happiness and compliments are bad for me. Science.

that's nOt how it works -

hehe and exploding doom is fun -

yEs it is.

I will keep complimenting you. Fear me.

... no-
I've broken bones- hurt cheeks don't scare me!