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I'm a fool- A poor fool- I got a boost from the litter, but the market for crushing strength wolves isn't very good- Boundless said: Silver :0 I love it! Definitely let us know when the next chapter comes out! . Doom Some wording that could be better here and there, but I'll try to look at it tomorrow when I'm more awake and help you out And I thought it was interesting. I think the cliffhanger/chapters that start out in action scenes may end up being more intruiging, but your chapter has really good writing and is detailed, so I think it balances itself out. . Celery :0 I - w h y like I know why but w h y
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I - is the apple easy to get back or is WP income slower for you? Edited at December 7, 2020 06:41 AM by Boundless
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what happened here i-- also question: would y'all be interested if i remade this old boi but like with more worldbuilding and a complete revamp kinda thing because i keep thinking about it for whatever reason
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Maybe... I'm a bit busy with all the RP's I'm in...
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