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Well- they're fighting on the same side, and in the same battle, and I want her to see him as he gets stabbed to "death" which is right at the end of the chapter, to make the reader want to keep reading to figure out what happened...
I could then have the next three chapters be the other three MC's point of view from different places and then the fourth chapter is Jaro again, and you don't know he's dead/alive till the end of the chapter... but still- Important good people that the readers are attached to need to die- I can't kill Thyra (Thinking of changing her to name to Tuma, as it's an African name and her culture is more African based than norse, which is where Thyra is from) because she and Pheo (might change his name to) are people of color, and I do not want to be the typical author that makes the dark/brown skinned people important only for them to die, especially because they're on the LGBTQ spectrum, and I like them-
Jaro and Saffa I have a connection to (if you need me to tell you who these characters are again, feel free to ask- kinda just rambling) so I don't want to kill them- I mean I love the love interest for Jaro, but killing him would be great too-
And I don't know if I can develope more good main characters- because I don't want one to be forced into existence just so I can kill someone important...
And Saffa will be Asexual, so there's no love interest to kill for her, Thyra/Tuma has gone through so much killing her love interest would be- way worse on her than Jaro and also she needs a bit of luck in her life.
Pheo doesn't really get connected... then again maybe a one of his many possibly love interests could die and still hurt him... hmmm... may have just found the solution :D |
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Doom said:
Well- they're fighting on the same side, and in the same battle, and I want her to see him as he gets stabbed to "death" which is right at the end of the chapter, to make the reader want to keep reading to figure out what happened...
I could then have the next three chapters be the other three MC's point of view from different places and then the fourth chapter is Jaro again, and you don't know he's dead/alive till the end of the chapter... but still- Important good people that the readers are attached to need to die- I can't kill Thyra (Thinking of changing her to name to Tuma, as it's an African name and her culture is more African based than norse, which is where Thyra is from) because she and Pheo (might change his name to) are people of color, and I do not want to be the typical author that makes the dark/brown skinned people important only for them to die, especially because they're on the LGBTQ spectrum, and I like them-
Jaro and Saffa I have a connection to (if you need me to tell you who these characters are again, feel free to ask- kinda just rambling) so I don't want to kill them- I mean I love the love interest for Jaro, but killing him would be great too-
And I don't know if I can develope more good main characters- because I don't want one to be forced into existence just so I can kill someone important...
And Saffa will be Asexual, so there's no love interest to kill for her, Thyra/Tuma has gone through so much killing her love interest would be- way worse on her than Jaro and also she needs a bit of luck in her life.
Pheo doesn't really get connected... then again maybe a one of his many possibly love interests could die and still hurt him... hmmm... may have just found the solution :D
Whatever you go for will be awesome-
How could it not be, if it was written by you? |
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Go ahead and try- I shall complement you if its the last thing I do-
Also someone who pm'ed me complemented your art also-
So your art is awesome-
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I WilL mURDEr yOU-
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