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Its not the best, but its my first piece drawn on an ipad. I normally use a sketch pad and pencil >.<
https://p38-mailws.icloud.com/wm/messagepart/C1404766-48EB-4A1B-B870-25EF3D677F99.png?guid=messagepart%3AINBOX%2F22791-2&type=image%2Fpng&name=C1404766-48EB-4A1B-B870-25EF3D677F99.png&size=1048554&dsid=314911764&clientId=3CF9A00D-36B3-4B1A-8311-9D9FCD199ED4 |
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@Wild
I'd suggest using a hosting site.
Try postimg or tinypic. Those are the easiest to work with. |
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https://i.postimg.cc/3xx7ThgF/Flower-Wolfy-1.png
How does this look? |
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Alright. So, first things first.
The wing joint should follow the shoulder blade. Those will be aligned. Next, you'll want the chest fur and stomach fur to line up. The leg seems a bit far forward and the nose seems just a tad bit too long. Also, you'll want the ears to line up unless the head is at an angle. |
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https://i.postimg.cc/CxcTZKVC/20190313-121052.jpg
(C) Myself at a museum
The wing might be a touch hard to see, but feathers are a little less distinctive, blending in on the inside. The wings tend to be straighter too. Your head might be a bit too long, the near ear too far back, and the mouth too straight. Wolf eyes tend not to be too oval from the side either. Overall, I don't think it's a bad drawing, I like your colour scheme. |
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SegoLily said:
Alright. So, first things first.
The wing joint should follow the shoulder blade. Those will be aligned. Next, you'll want the chest fur and stomach fur to line up. The leg seems a bit far forward and the nose seems just a tad bit too long. Also, you'll want the ears to line up unless the head is at an angle.
Thank you.
Coyote said:
https://i.postimg.cc/CxcTZKVC/20190313-121052.jpg
(C) Myself at a museum
The wing might be a touch hard to see, but feathers are a little less distinctive, blending in on the inside. The wings tend to be straighter too. Your head might be a bit too long, the near ear too far back, and the mouth too straight. Wolf eyes tend not to be too oval from the side either. Overall, I don't think it's a bad drawing, I like your colour scheme.
Thank you, the color scheme was an OC's for an art contest. |
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These? x.x I didn't use references for them, so I'd love some critique. :D https://i.postimg.cc/BQXCWLHr/SK5-YU.png https://i.postimg.cc/ncgGnF1C/SK3-YU.png |
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Everything looks really good.
The only thing I have is the lower wolf has a weird... angle in the back where curved would be more rounded. I suppose. |
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Coyote said:
(C) Myself at a museum
The wing might be a touch hard to see, but feathers are a little less distinctive, blending in on the inside. The wings tend to be straighter too. Your head might be a bit too long, the near ear too far back, and the mouth too straight. Wolf eyes tend not to be too oval from the side either. Overall, I don't think it's a bad drawing, I like your colour scheme.
It is my OC. |
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SegoLily said:
Everything looks really good.
The only thing I have is the lower wolf has a weird... angle in the back where curved would be more rounded. I suppose.
Thanks lol, it was such a weird position to draw. x3 I appreciate the input! |
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