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 Lunar Moons
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The Loving Warmth of Christmas sniffs under a bush and finds Rhinoceros Beetle!

Um, thaanksss...?
 Zeraphia
05:30:26 Space Pirate Captain
Lunar

Just put up one of each at a time. XD
 Lunar Moons
05:30:09 Space Pirate Mate
Vah

Eh, good question XD
 Smilecat
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Vote?
 Zeraphia
05:28:11 Space Pirate Captain
Why not both?
 Lunar Moons
05:27:49 Space Pirate Mate
I need a vote, should I do dragon adopts ( it would be pictures of dragons ive colored) or wolf adopts ( again, would just be pictures of wolves ive colored)
 Zeraphia
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Urux
Ooooh I hope she gives you something good
 Urux
05:01:37 Urox, Uris
Vah
Thank you! You'll see me on stalking this girl until she pops -WP Click-
 Zeraphia
04:58:29 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

Oh have fun! Hopefully the flight goes well!
 Urux
04:58:03 Urox, Uris
Vah
I'm hoping the soreness goes away, but I might take some nurofen to try and get rid of it.
I just wanted to pop on to say hi before I vanish and stalk chat from my phone for over a day haha.
See ya! I'm off to grab a coffee to fuel my endeavour <3
 Zeraphia
04:55:47 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

Oh man that sounds absolutely awful. >.>

I'm not too bad!

Rain

Yeah. Most birth defects were included in order to have a CP penalty... the only ones that really don't are the ones that change the pelt. And another one, I don't remember the name of.
 Whispering Snow
04:54:34 It's me Rain!! :D
Vah
Hmmm interesting
 Urux
04:54:33 Urox, Uris
Vah
I'm alright, slept on my neck funny. Great thing to do right before your 24 hours flight </3 I'm in limbo waiting to leave.
How are you?
 Zeraphia
04:53:46 Space Pirate Captain
Urux!

How are ya?
 Zeraphia
04:53:40 Space Pirate Captain
-WP Click-

This forum has a list of which CP birth defects will affect.
 Urux
04:53:32 Urox, Uris
Hi chat ^^
 Zeraphia
04:53:13 Space Pirate Captain
Rain

...
I'd say a good 80% of defects limit stats actually.

Let me get the list
 Lunar Moons
04:50:27 Space Pirate Mate
Dont Come Knocking eats a mushroom and gets a headache.

Oof, hope your ok after eating that girl.
 Whispering Snow
04:50:17 It's me Rain!! :D
Vah
True. But no one breeds for hindersome defects, right? I can't think of any cp stat limiting ones?
 Zeraphia
04:48:18 Space Pirate Captain
Rain

I mean, to be fair, people already breed for defects anyways. So I doubt it would change much.

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Critiques <3November 1, 2021 09:52 PM


Zyphers souls

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Most of your work has what is known as blurring by the looks of things this is not really a bad thing buy can take away the over all quality of the piece and in some cases take away the true perspective that the artist was going for.
The last one in the jail or sewer I can't tell and it is really dark maybe change it a bit add light like a torch on the wall or have one holing a lantern in his mouth or candle to add soft glow lighting to the piece to help bring it to life more and enfisize the details better
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 09:56 PM


sock monkey

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Thanks so much for the critiques! Do you have any examples of blurring? I really don't use that brush as a primary tool, and so I'd love to see where you mean!
oh, it's supposed to feel sorta lifeless and dark! But I do think those are some good ideas, thanks :)
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 10:18 PM


Zyphers souls

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Normally one blurs the back ground a little as well as distant objects in your works in your picture of the horse head there is a lot of blurring in places it should not have been. I would also suggest on the dark images adding night eye effect it is hard to get just right but normally on a computer I use the highlighter and ring it around the eyes to make it look like there glowing then touch back up the fur around the eyes and back ground so only the eyes glow but there are other ways to get this effect metallic paint is one way. Which brush did you use exactly it will help me describe what method to use better. I will give you an example when I can riggt now I am baby sitting
Critiques <3November 2, 2021 08:03 AM


sock monkey

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Oh, the horse head is two/three years old, and traditional! There was no brush for that :) I just wanted to include something graphite. It's definitely a little iffy shading and anatomy wise, I agree.

And that's a good point! Blurring backgrounds is something I should probs improve on, and the eye thing I'll take into account!
I use a variety of brushes on Autodesk Sketchbook, I couldn't pinpoint exactly one.
Critiques <3November 2, 2021 08:19 AM


RazorWolfe

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I have to say that as an artist that isnt very good, i must praise you for your current skill level! You're amazing!
However since you insist for a critic i think ill have to point out the lighting in a few of the pieces was just a bit off. For example, the one with the wolf and the planets/moons in the background: the entire body of the wolf would be lit up by the reflection of the sun off of them, not just in a few places, due to the fact the size of the planets would make the reflecting light cast across a very large area, especially with the wolf seeming to be so near. I always (try to) remember to make sure i know where my light source is casting/what direction its going because (in my personal opinion) perfect lighting just makes the piece seem so much better than you thought it would be
However as i mention lighting the last one in that gallery(the one done with mostly shadows) has perfect lighting so i can only assume that you already mastered the whole lighting thing X3
Critiques <3November 2, 2021 09:18 AM


Evermore

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You might remember me, I spam your art gallery thread :p
I love your work, and I hope this doesn't come across too harsh
One thing that I think might need some improvement is your lineless works
They are lovely, however some of them don't seem to have the same good anatomy (sometimes a nose is wonky, etc. it doesn't seem as solid as your with lines style)
I am not sure how you make them, however I suggest maybe start with a sketch and paint over that? So you have a little something to work with
I really like the colors in your lineless, and that style of art is much trickier than with lines, so a few slip ups here and there makes sense :)
I absolutely adore your art, I hope this wasn't to harsh ^^' <3
Critiques <3November 2, 2021 06:57 PM


sock monkey

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killer vibes
oh, that's super helpful, thanks so much! I'm really not good with rim lighting, stuff like that. I'll definitely try to work on that a bit more :)
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evermore
for sure aha, thanks for your input! I sorta just wing it with lineless ngl, I'll be sure to work on my sketching a little more :)

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