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I have two. :o
https://i.postimg.cc/YCPBxRn3/Sketch2.png
https://i.postimg.cc/K8qnzk9w/Sketch3.png |
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https://i.postimg.cc/J48DbzdY/B9-BFEC75-5-C7-C-4096-8-F1-A-FE20-CC2735-E1.png
I got this x.x |
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@Pyt
The first one looks relatively good, but that little dip in the chest looks really weird. The second one has a little issue with that front left paw(left for the animal) it looks broken. Try angling that one forward.
@Neytrix
The wing on the wolf should be farther forward and a little bigger. Wings connect with the shoulder blades, generally, and the same with the bird, just bring the wings up closer to the head a tad bit. |
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@Lily I see it. :o Thanks!
@Coyote Thoughts? |
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Pryragrithim, I think you and Neytix are too good for my silly anatomy help, but I've got some tips. The legs are a touch shapeless, and I think the body might be a bit too thick, though that could very easily be a style choice. I honestly don't have a whole lot I can say on your images, as again, only the legs need any work on yours.
I drew out the first draft anyhow.
https://i.postimg.cc/vT5Cb1cj/thing.png
Again, a lot of this is simply difference in style. I'd say all you have to do is edit the legs a bit. I'll post about the second piece when I finish the next draft. |
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@Coyote My art is nothing compared to Neytrix's though. :3 |
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Hmm, I appear to be having a lot of difficulty with the second draft. It is a slightly unnatural pose, so I'll have to write out instead of draw it.
The ears are too far back, and should be pinned as the stance seems aggressive. The tail would arch up to show dominance, or straight as a warning, or tucked under to show fear. It might not be visible from this angle.
The legs, again, are a touch boneless. The back legs wouldn't be that bent to the side, the toes should face forwards, and the leg itself would be straighter.
The head is where I had my difficulty. I would suggest raising it so the animal stares straight at the screen instead of looking down.
Sorry if that doesn't make sense... |
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Neytrix, I can't see anything wrong with your image. The forelegs of the wolf might be a bit wonky from the position, but I couldn't find a way to improve it. |
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@Coy Nope, I get it! And thanks! |
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Coyote said:
Neytrix, I can't see anything wrong with your image. The forelegs of the wolf might be a bit wonky from the position, but I couldn't find a way to improve it.
Ah I see, thanks though! |
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