Wolf Play : Somethings amiss here

10:13:07 Cyber / Onion

@Dire Wolf

If you put the lineart layer on the wolf first, then add their other decor on top of it, the lineart won't cover the pretty wings and such on your wolfies :3

(Gear layers in the order you put it on the wolf)

10:11:57 Dire, DWH

my best breeder died nooooo

10:11:55 Cyber / Onion

Dire Wolf

Thank you! ;u;

Rogue Wildfires

10:11:26 Rogue

Thank God none of my wolves died

10:11:01 Is a dinosaur rawr

And that's 3-2 ^^

10:09:14 Dire, DWH

I love it!

10:09:02 Cyber / Onion

It's a custom gear found in barter

10:08:52 Cyber / Onion

Direwolf

Lineart upgrade :3 I drew new lineart for all 6 wolf poses, I really just intended to update the Female Beta pose, but then I ended up doing all of them.

Adds shadows / highlights / definition and claws because clipped claws on wild wolves looks so funny to me XD

Echo Eclipse

10:08:40 Echo | (They/She/He)

Oh I'm so childish (BE)
-WP Click-

10:06:15 Dire, DWH

@cyber
what is on the wolves that makes their pelt look different?

10:05:59 Is a dinosaur rawr

Leeu hahaha, I know all the tricks lmao XD
^^

10:04:56 Cyber / Onion

-WP Click-
*Excited squeaks*

;u; my first 70+ rarity puppy was born last night eee! Another Time Dynamic coat muhahaha.

-WP Click-
Vehi Conn also threw a rare pelt puppy I didn't even know existed yet, Eggnog is so pretty!

Leo

10:04:05 Leo | Bear say rawr

Aura
Fuck, you're right... Make a new one, i'm in one right now xD

10:01:58 Is a dinosaur rawr

Leeu are you sure it's not 3? XD lmao lol but yeah probably
I'll have to take your word for it cause my recent battles aren't showing up

Leo

10:00:36 Leo | Bear say rawr

4-1 right?

09:59:47 Is a dinosaur rawr

Yeah I know ^^

Leo

09:58:14 Leo | Bear say rawr

I've been busy this WoW <3

09:57:07 Is a dinosaur rawr

Since you won't admit I'm getting better
-Click-
The gap is getting bigger :))

09:54:10 Is a dinosaur rawr

Leeu just saying XD

Leo

09:53:20 Leo | Bear say rawr

Aura
I know xD Give me a moment

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10:13:07 Cyber / Onion

10:11:57 Dire, DWH

my best breeder died nooooo

10:11:55 Cyber / Onion

Dire Wolf

Thank you! ;u;

Rogue Wildfires

10:11:26 Rogue

Thank God none of my wolves died

10:11:01 Is a dinosaur rawr

And that's 3-2 ^^

10:09:14 Dire, DWH

I love it!

10:09:02 Cyber / Onion

It's a custom gear found in barter

10:08:52 Cyber / Onion

Echo Eclipse

10:08:40 Echo | (They/She/He)

Oh I'm so childish (BE)
-WP Click-

10:06:15 Dire, DWH

@cyber
what is on the wolves that makes their pelt look different?

10:05:59 Is a dinosaur rawr

Leeu hahaha, I know all the tricks lmao XD
^^

10:04:56 Cyber / Onion

Leo

10:04:05 Leo | Bear say rawr

Aura
Fuck, you're right... Make a new one, i'm in one right now xD

10:01:58 Is a dinosaur rawr

Leeu are you sure it's not 3? XD lmao lol but yeah probably
I'll have to take your word for it cause my recent battles aren't showing up

Leo

10:00:36 Leo | Bear say rawr

4-1 right?

09:59:47 Is a dinosaur rawr

Yeah I know ^^

Leo

09:58:14 Leo | Bear say rawr

I've been busy this WoW <3

09:57:07 Is a dinosaur rawr

Since you won't admit I'm getting better
-Click-
The gap is getting bigger :))

09:54:10 Is a dinosaur rawr

Leeu just saying XD

Leo

09:53:20 Leo | Bear say rawr

Aura
I know xD Give me a moment

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June 7, 2022 02:05 PM

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Idk if it's the colors or the lines or whatever but some thing is wrong here. Can y'all help me out?

She's based on a lionfish

June 7, 2022 02:10 PM

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She sorta looks scary

June 7, 2022 02:22 PM

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maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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I was trying to go for a cute but creepy vibe, not sure how well that came across lol

awooo said:

She sorta looks scary

June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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Yeah, I tend to leave lining till last cause I hate doing it and while I was doing it I realized I didn't like something

swiftystarss said:

maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

Edited at June 7, 2022 02:26 PM by Flower Field

June 7, 2022 03:48 PM

Cinnabar Banks Pack

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Maybe it's that dip in the tail? Looks a bit too sharp. Could also be the facial features? Seems a bit off, compared ta the rest of the art.

Edited at June 7, 2022 03:55 PM by Cinnabar Banks Pack

June 7, 2022 03:49 PM

Jelly

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I find her eyes unsettling, haha they're just so different than the art style. The only way I could explain it is if you put googly eyes over a face.

June 7, 2022 03:50 PM

bumblebee

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I think the proportion of the head is slightly off? Especially in comparison to the size of their arms...

Also it might be that there isn't much of a chin, which sort of breaks up a lot of the sharper lines that you have!

I really like the premise / concept, and it looks good, just not exactly proportional to the way a body looks! <3

June 7, 2022 04:32 PM

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Alright! Took some things into consideration and here's V2