Wolf Play : Help me make this look more realistic/ better!

10:35:28 Quasar, QH

too many pups

10:35:19 Quasar, QH

well if you end up with too many or something (not possible) you know where to find me lol

10:34:27 Cyber / Onion

I found a dye for sale for a little under 3k and snatched it up muhahaha

friend and I are gonna try for Quasar puppies :3 she also picked a dye up, don't think she's picked a wolf to use it on yet though

10:33:31 Quasar, QH

thanks! im not entirely sure when or where I got it, but I was like, its pretty! Lol

10:32:59 Cyber / Onion

just saw that XD i have a habit of forgetting to refresh chat after being on a page for a while oops

So pretty!! I love the aurora background with her

10:32:14 Quasar, QH

did you try the second one?

10:31:48 Cyber / Onion

Awww broken link for me, Quasar QH

10:31:05 Is a dinosaur rawr

No problem!! I need to finish the thing im doing now XD

10:30:27 Is a dinosaur rawr

It's not showing up on my side so Leeu I'm assuming you won one and I won one now?

Leo

10:29:59 Leo | Bear say rawr

Aura
5-3, gotta go real quick xD

10:29:21

Thank you guys so much, I tried to log into this game a couple times, the other tries failed, this worked!

10:28:32 Quasar, QH

-WP Click-

10:28:23 Quasar, QH

@cyber
when you do the quasar wings I will be putting them on her immediately -WP Click-

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10:25:56

Howling
Hello welcome to the game ^^

10:25:53 Cyber / Onion

welcome to the game, Howling Stars :D

Dire Wolf Haven

10:24:12 Dire, DWH

they are sooo pretty! I love how there are the glowing tattoo things :P

10:24:08

Hi chat! i'm a new player! nice to meet you all! (I can't rp yet, Just one more day!)

10:23:07 Cyber / Onion

Quasar wing concepts on Quasar, White, and Slate coats:

-Click-

-Click-

-Click-

and I did a Topaz concept just for fun, I was thinking of using that pelt on Lightshow but I might try for Tiger's Eye for her
-Click-

10:20:40 Cyber / Onion

*I'll just

10:20:26 Cyber / Onion

Ah, sorry. Rules said chat speak was discouraged but some was allowed like common things like lol.

I just try to avoid it entirely. Habit, sorry.

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10:35:28 Quasar, QH

too many pups

10:35:19 Quasar, QH

well if you end up with too many or something (not possible) you know where to find me lol

10:34:27 Cyber / Onion

10:33:31 Quasar, QH

thanks! im not entirely sure when or where I got it, but I was like, its pretty! Lol

10:32:59 Cyber / Onion

just saw that XD i have a habit of forgetting to refresh chat after being on a page for a while oops

So pretty!! I love the aurora background with her

10:32:14 Quasar, QH

did you try the second one?

10:31:48 Cyber / Onion

Awww broken link for me, Quasar QH

10:31:05 Is a dinosaur rawr

No problem!! I need to finish the thing im doing now XD

10:30:27 Is a dinosaur rawr

It's not showing up on my side so Leeu I'm assuming you won one and I won one now?

Leo

10:29:59 Leo | Bear say rawr

Aura
5-3, gotta go real quick xD

10:29:21

Thank you guys so much, I tried to log into this game a couple times, the other tries failed, this worked!

10:28:32 Quasar, QH

-WP Click-

10:28:23 Quasar, QH

@cyber
when you do the quasar wings I will be putting them on her immediately -WP Click-

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10:25:56

Howling
Hello welcome to the game ^^

10:25:53 Cyber / Onion

welcome to the game, Howling Stars :D

Dire Wolf Haven

10:24:12 Dire, DWH

they are sooo pretty! I love how there are the glowing tattoo things :P

10:24:08

Hi chat! i'm a new player! nice to meet you all! (I can't rp yet, Just one more day!)

10:23:07 Cyber / Onion

10:20:40 Cyber / Onion

*I'll just

10:20:26 Cyber / Onion

Ah, sorry. Rules said chat speak was discouraged but some was allowed like common things like lol.

I just try to avoid it entirely. Habit, sorry.

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June 11, 2018 10:34 PM

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Hello! I was working on a semi realistic piece, and I wanted some critique of it! If you have any hints on where it could be improved to look more realistic , I would be so thankful!! Thanks!!

https://image.ibb.co/cC7q7o/33845_CD1_1_BE6_4586_86_C7_26_AF68_A26_C54.png

June 11, 2018 10:37 PM

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Maybe expand the car side of dogs head up. ^^

June 11, 2018 10:37 PM

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I loves the fur (its much better than I can do) but double check your anatomy. Also, the dog is way to skinny. But it's really cute! I can tell you have a lot of potential.

June 11, 2018 10:38 PM

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I love it!

Id suggest making the body a bit thicker and getting rid of the tongue(or repositioning it). Also, add some life to the dog's eyes if possible.

Unless it is a really small dog, that bunny isn't gonna be that big. Unless it is a giant bunny. I love it, but it isn't realistic ^^

That's all, really :D

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:39 PM by Astrophel

June 11, 2018 10:39 PM

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I'm not great with canines, but I'm great with rabbits. The rabbit's nose is a V like shape, quite different from that of a dog's. And the nose isn't very pink, just a slight blush.

Here is my bunny

https://s15.postimg.cc/sqla5gf1n/3_F5_AE822-_E4_AD-43_BA-94_F0-3_C92_A48_CB008.jpg

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:40 PM by Damian Wayne

June 11, 2018 10:39 PM

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Thanks everyone! I'll post some updates once I'm done

June 11, 2018 10:47 PM

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Also little note, it's supposed to be a puppy :D

June 11, 2018 10:53 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/mAxnL8/D42_FD071_0750_47_F5_8_AF0_3_F6_BC1_EA99_FB.png

Updated! I think it's better, but the eyes...

Anyone know how to add life?

June 11, 2018 10:55 PM

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Maybe make the eyes a lighter, and slightly brighter brown?

At least maybe a bit brighter.

That could give it some life to the eyes

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:56 PM by Destinations End

June 11, 2018 10:56 PM