Wolf Play : Constructive Criticism

06:03:27 Don't call me BJ.

@Reprobate
I draw it cause it makes BANK

06:02:23 🤓

most people will think that yeah

06:02:06 Don't call me BJ.

The test thinks I'm a furry because I draw furries
:/

06:01:02 Is a dinosaur rawr

AmyD lmao yeah I can imagine XD

06:00:16 🤓

Cea
LMAOO based conclusion, say it louder<33

06:00:00 🤓

I feel like being a furry is really one of those things where it's just a self-identity thing haha. If you want to be, you are one, if not, you aren't

05:58:50 Don't call me BJ.

@Reprobate
But I'm not a furry ;-;
I don't think. I should take a cheezy quiz LOL
"Am I a furry" quiz

05:57:23 Cae, Blue

when the ball is stuck at the top, the issue is that player paddle cannot go outside the boundary but ai paddle can. so it can hit the ball, but you cannot :')

05:57:06 Amy/Anpmygdala

Ary
It's pretty great XD but my muscles do get sore a lot

05:56:31 Cae, Blue

conclusion: dont use ai to code games if you want them to work properly 😔

05:56:31 🤓

just embrace being a furry and you won't have that dilemma anymore

05:56:09 Is a dinosaur rawr

AmyD awesome ^^

05:55:25 🤓

Cae
it can go faster when you hit it in certain ways, in my experience?? I might be imagining things
Also, the ball just got stuck at the top for several hits back and forth and then I guess the program decided I lost, for whatever reason

05:54:30 Don't call me BJ.

Both images have doll nudity and scars
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05:53:41 Amy/Anpmygdala

Ary
Pretty fun
We did take a shower at the end (it started raining lol)

05:53:29 Cae, Blue

rep, but the ball is so SLOW, regardless of how you hit it. it speeds up with time but the whole process takes at least 30 seconds for me :')

05:53:24 Don't call me BJ.

@Cae
Well, I have my Persona into an anthro, so furry artists can draw him, but like, I don't necessarily go to that version of him first, but it's part of my persona's ref

05:52:35 🤓

Cae
nooo come ooon

05:52:28 Is a dinosaur rawr

AmyD how was riding? ^^

05:52:25 🤓

You *can* make the ball faster by hitting it at an angle/with the corner but it misses like half the time so, I'm not sure it's a worthwhile game lol

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06:03:27 Don't call me BJ.

@Reprobate
I draw it cause it makes BANK

06:02:23 🤓

most people will think that yeah

06:02:06 Don't call me BJ.

The test thinks I'm a furry because I draw furries
:/

06:01:02 Is a dinosaur rawr

AmyD lmao yeah I can imagine XD

06:00:16 🤓

Cea
LMAOO based conclusion, say it louder<33

06:00:00 🤓

I feel like being a furry is really one of those things where it's just a self-identity thing haha. If you want to be, you are one, if not, you aren't

05:58:50 Don't call me BJ.

@Reprobate
But I'm not a furry ;-;
I don't think. I should take a cheezy quiz LOL
"Am I a furry" quiz

05:57:23 Cae, Blue

when the ball is stuck at the top, the issue is that player paddle cannot go outside the boundary but ai paddle can. so it can hit the ball, but you cannot :')

05:57:06 Amy/Anpmygdala

Ary
It's pretty great XD but my muscles do get sore a lot

05:56:31 Cae, Blue

conclusion: dont use ai to code games if you want them to work properly 😔

05:56:31 🤓

just embrace being a furry and you won't have that dilemma anymore

05:56:09 Is a dinosaur rawr

AmyD awesome ^^

05:55:25 🤓

05:54:30 Don't call me BJ.

Both images have doll nudity and scars
-Click-
-Click-

05:53:41 Amy/Anpmygdala

Ary
Pretty fun
We did take a shower at the end (it started raining lol)

05:53:29 Cae, Blue

rep, but the ball is so SLOW, regardless of how you hit it. it speeds up with time but the whole process takes at least 30 seconds for me :')

05:53:24 Don't call me BJ.

@Cae
Well, I have my Persona into an anthro, so furry artists can draw him, but like, I don't necessarily go to that version of him first, but it's part of my persona's ref

05:52:35 🤓

Cae
nooo come ooon

05:52:28 Is a dinosaur rawr

AmyD how was riding? ^^

05:52:25 🤓

You *can* make the ball faster by hitting it at an angle/with the corner but it misses like half the time so, I'm not sure it's a worthwhile game lol

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February 24, 2022 12:41 PM

TKO

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you

Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus

February 24, 2022 02:48 PM

Lucifer

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ok so the last attempt looks great!

the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?

the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves

February 24, 2022 02:51 PM

Nez.ity

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 02:52 PM

TKO

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Please do

Nez.ity said:

If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 04:53 PM

Nez.ity

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio