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 Zeraphia
11:25:57 Space Pirate Captain
Hmm. What do y'all think?

Playful menace or broody-ish baddie?
 Zeraphia
11:22:30 Space Pirate Captain
Lackadaisy

... I could not. I could not function on that little sleep XD

I need my sleep lol
 Catori
11:21:16 Cat
Sorry 13 not 10 -.-
 Catori
11:20:30 Cat
I have had 10 litters pop today and not a single boost or defect :/
 Lackadaisy
11:19:30 
Vah,

Wow. Collected. My usual is going to bed around 1 (12GT), falling asleep at 2, and then getting thrown out of bed at 5.
 Zeraphia
11:18:24 Space Pirate Captain
Lackadaisy

Pffft mood.

I mean, it's not totally ruined-ruined, but it's not what it used to be either. I used to call it a night around 11:00 (midnight GT) and then I'd get up around 8 ish.

Not anymore lol
 Lackadaisy
11:13:40 
Vah,

Sleep schedule? What's that?

My Captain should really get on me, but in all honesty, I'm fairly sure his sleep schedule is as shit as mine.
 Serpents
11:12:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Reaper ah Im like an hour behind GT and I mean sleep now 8am is early.. I have stuff to do in the morning mainly Dog kennle asistant ant my local Humane socity also I mean 11 is not that late did not just misspell a word no I Zane never
 Zeraphia
11:10:52 Space Pirate Captain
Lackadaisy

Oh man. The last few nights have *wrecked* what little sleep schedule I once had.
 The Reaper
11:09:14 Reaper / Grim
Zane
Me too. I'm on gt and I have an 8am in the morning...
 Lackadaisy
11:07:49 
Vah,

Sleep? What's that?
 Zeraphia
11:07:31 Space Pirate Captain
Sleep is good
 Serpents
11:06:04 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
I should sleep soon
 Zeraphia
11:03:48 Space Pirate Captain
Lunar

Oooh nice!
 The Reaper
11:02:11 Reaper / Grim
Blu
What Vah said :3
 bluebird
11:02:06 Blu | Agee
- lunar
aww she's cutie!
 Zeraphia
11:01:58 Space Pirate Captain
Blue

Oh same here. Same here. I just, I can't leave. XD
 Lunar Moons
11:01:36 Space Pirate Mate
-WP Click-

Im totally ok...... anywho, my first albino
 bluebird
11:00:56 Blu | Agee
- space

yeah that makes sense -- it's nice to see it's still around, honestly. there's something about the old-internet feel that I really love
 Zeraphia
10:59:13 Space Pirate Captain
Blue

Definitely. XD

But we'll have people that come back. A lot of times you'll get school students that go on to college and that takes a lot of time, so they won't be on as much. Once they graduate, they tend to come back.

But there's always new members joining and rejoining!

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Thoughts/light criticism ?January 7, 2021 05:54 AM


starwolfs

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Could I get some thoughts on this, first thing though I know the one wing is horrible xD so please look over the detail as best as you can since I know that's wrong and didn't realize that until I was done lol. I was trying to figure out how to use drawing app and this what came out of it , also I've added 2 others that could use some light criticism as well
done on January 7
done on January 26


done on January 25

^ this one I actually really like the concept of and will probably do redraws of to see if I've in proved on my skills ^
( credits belong to me )

Edited at January 28, 2021 07:50 PM by starwolfs
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 12:48 AM


Wisp

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It looks like for the shading you did smudge, but I would recommend using a blending tool. Also, try to have the light coming from the same direction (the horns have shadows going to the left, but the wings have shadows going to the right, and the spikes have the shadows going up).
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I would recommend a deep blue for shading, and a very light yellow for lighting (that's what personally use).
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Since you included lighting in the eyes I'd recommend lighting the rest of the piece
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If the dragon has arms then I would attach the wings to the arms
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I would make the nostrils a little smaller.
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I hope nothing came across as mean, I always feel like I'm being bad when giving constructive criticism.
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 05:47 AM


starwolfs

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Thanks for the constructive criticism all the stuff that you mentioned I didn't realize until you said it, I just knew something didn't look right about it .
Thanks also for the tips on the shading and lighting those are very helpful , first time actually doing digital and I really didn't have a clue how to use anything
don't worry you don't sound mean at all :)
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:29 PM


Former Pack

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sorry if any of this seems rude at all XD
I would personally recommend something showing some part of the mouth, because in the current picture, you can't see any of it, and it looks a bit odd.
that is actually my only suggestion, you did an amazing job, all in all!
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:42 PM


starwolfs

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Yeah I seam to be struggling with mouths on everything and this was early on ( I think the first thing I actually did was this piece ) so I wasn't even going to try a mouth at the time. I am working on them now but they still need work for me to be comfortable with them
thanks for your input ^^

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