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<div align="center">hi - <div align="center">i am looking for critiques on my art so i can develop as an artist.
<div align="center">i would appreciate it.<div align="center">thank you! <3<div align="center">
<div align="center">gallery - https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=40219<div align="center">
<div align="center">i use my phone for art because it doesn't hate me like my computer.<div align="center">
<div align="center">i might start doing things on my computer but that is unlikely anytime soon.<div align="center">
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<div align="center">tips -<div align="center">-make foreheads less sharp.<div align="center">-neck length and anatomy.<div align="center">-eyes.<div align="center">
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Edited at September 21, 2019 09:31 PM by After Death
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A bit spaghetti like legs but its adorable, honestly I like how it looks but the first picture has a long neck, |
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Your style is adorable and has a lot of potential to get even better :o
My main thoughts are to work on eyes. Unfortunately i'm horrid at art and need to work on them myself so i cannot give tips on how to do so. Also maybe make the foreheads less sharp? |
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<div style="text-align: center;">crows - <div style="text-align: center;">the spaghetti legs were on purpose ;)
<div style="text-align: center;">thanks for the criticism! c:<div style="text-align: center;">
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<div style="text-align: center;">king- <div style="text-align: center;">thank you, that means a lot!
<div style="text-align: center;">next time i will make the foreheads less shard and a but more sloped. c:<div style="text-align: center;">i will look at wolf images to improve on my eyes.<div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">thanks for the criticism!
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<div style="text-align: center;">Perhaps you could work on your proportion and anatomy more? On your full body ref sheet I noticed that the head is a little bit bigger than it should be, typically 2 heads should fit on where the body would be, if you know what I mean ^^. <div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">Something I think you should also do is go into more complex shading, instead of just plain old cell shading. Or you could do complex cell shading :000
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<div align="center">Double post
Edited at September 22, 2019 09:17 PM by Eclipse~
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<div align="center">Triple post
Edited at September 22, 2019 09:16 PM by Eclipse~
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I have no words friend, I love your art <3
Though like a previous post, the necks look a little long to me unless they’re out looking for cats to steal for u. Which, actually might be a good thing for u |
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