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 Fallen Angel
12:09:30 Aloysius, Fallen
did I just kill chat?
 Fallen Angel
12:04:53 Aloysius, Fallen
Vah

so are hands that's why I never draw full body
 Zeraphia
12:02:50 Space Pirate Captain
Mouths are hard, absolutely.
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 Fallen Angel
12:02:26 Aloysius, Fallen
I'm so bad at drawing mouths
 Silent Lucidity
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Hey chat
 Zeraphia
12:01:27 Space Pirate Captain
Yeah, looks good!
 Fallen Angel
12:01:01 Aloysius, Fallen
I think I fixed it
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11:59:06 You're just yellow
700 mush, I need 300 more, I'm on a roll today.
 Cybertronion
11:58:17 Cyber / Onion
okay i vanish again now xP

(random Cyber appearance wee)
 Cybertronion
11:57:38 Cyber / Onion
You could add a faint or partial line in the middle to indicate they've got two rows of teeth pressed together?
 Zeraphia
11:57:33 Space Pirate Captain
XD

It's really up to you and what you want it to look like.

I prefer no teeth lines but some do. XD
 Cybertronion
11:57:03 Cyber / Onion
I actually really like your avatar as is, fits the style.

I liek the teeth lines xD
 Cybertronion
11:56:38 Cyber / Onion
@Fallen Angel

Combination of studying mouth designs others have drawn, and looking at real mouths and how they move. If you understand how the Real Thing works, it's a lot easier to stylize it and exaggerate things without it tipping into no longer looking 'real' even with an anime / cartoon style rendering.

I like to watch speed paints of people drawing, I learn a lot of techniques I'd not have thought of otherwise that way.
 Zeraphia
11:55:43 Space Pirate Captain
Fallen

Honesty you could erase the teeth lines and it'd probably look fantastic!
 VioletEcho
11:55:24 Is a dinosaur rawr
Gray I'll take it, thank you for saving me
 Fallen Angel
11:55:18 Aloysius, Fallen
anyone have tips on how to draw anime style mouths better cause my avatars mouth looks awful compared to the rest the drawing
 Night Shade
11:55:13 Graves | Chaos
I'm going to have to try and be online all day tomorrow haha
 Den of Thieves
11:52:56 
Nux I have his daughter!
 Howling stars
11:51:50 
2 of my wolves are friggin pregnant.

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 Fallen Angel
12:09:30 Aloysius, Fallen
did I just kill chat?
 Fallen Angel
12:04:53 Aloysius, Fallen
Vah

so are hands that's why I never draw full body
 Zeraphia
12:02:50 Space Pirate Captain
Mouths are hard, absolutely.
 Queen Elsa
12:02:44 Snowflake, Queen
Heyo chat
 Fallen Angel
12:02:26 Aloysius, Fallen
I'm so bad at drawing mouths
 Silent Lucidity
12:01:38 Silent, Lucid
Hey chat
 Zeraphia
12:01:27 Space Pirate Captain
Yeah, looks good!
 Fallen Angel
12:01:01 Aloysius, Fallen
I think I fixed it
 ~♥Nux♥~
11:59:06 You're just yellow
700 mush, I need 300 more, I'm on a roll today.
 Cybertronion
11:58:17 Cyber / Onion
okay i vanish again now xP

(random Cyber appearance wee)
 Cybertronion
11:57:38 Cyber / Onion
You could add a faint or partial line in the middle to indicate they've got two rows of teeth pressed together?
 Zeraphia
11:57:33 Space Pirate Captain
XD

It's really up to you and what you want it to look like.

I prefer no teeth lines but some do. XD
 Cybertronion
11:57:03 Cyber / Onion
I actually really like your avatar as is, fits the style.

I liek the teeth lines xD
 Cybertronion
11:56:38 Cyber / Onion
@Fallen Angel

Combination of studying mouth designs others have drawn, and looking at real mouths and how they move. If you understand how the Real Thing works, it's a lot easier to stylize it and exaggerate things without it tipping into no longer looking 'real' even with an anime / cartoon style rendering.

I like to watch speed paints of people drawing, I learn a lot of techniques I'd not have thought of otherwise that way.
 Zeraphia
11:55:43 Space Pirate Captain
Fallen

Honesty you could erase the teeth lines and it'd probably look fantastic!
 VioletEcho
11:55:24 Is a dinosaur rawr
Gray I'll take it, thank you for saving me
 Fallen Angel
11:55:18 Aloysius, Fallen
anyone have tips on how to draw anime style mouths better cause my avatars mouth looks awful compared to the rest the drawing
 Night Shade
11:55:13 Graves | Chaos
I'm going to have to try and be online all day tomorrow haha
 Den of Thieves
11:52:56 
Nux I have his daughter!
 Howling stars
11:51:50 
2 of my wolves are friggin pregnant.




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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!March 10, 2019 03:18 PM


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The wing of the bird doesn't stand out, and usually the feathers are visible when folded!
Also, don't be afraid to use contrast.
I love the background though and the lovely expression, great job Dash!



Edited at March 10, 2019 03:18 PM by Neytrix
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!March 10, 2019 03:19 PM


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Could I get some critics on this?

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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!March 15, 2019 03:26 PM


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Neytrix

It looks gorgeous!
The ears seem just a tiny bit big, but other than that, breathtaking!

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