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Wolves for cheap- Up for auction now!

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Wolves for sale :3

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Okay chat is dead

01:49:24 Whisp

I just updated my bio what do you guys think

01:45:15 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
Your noodles have meat in them?
Damn I must be eating the cheap shit

01:44:35 Venn/Venne

Spirit - camt bring meat products either, whixh sucks cuz instant noodles are so good here. 😅

01:41:42 Whisp

GOOD NIGHT Y'all

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01:33:11 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Collar
I also have 18 chickens, 1 duck & 1 leopard gecko

Don't be like me and actually get some sleep

01:30:47 Mr Palette Guy

Collar, night night

01:29:22 ♰ Vapor ♰

alriiight chat, i gotta run to lock in on comms and then pass the hell out if my energy drink lets me
thanks for the chats <3

01:29:01 ♰ Vapor ♰

emmet

awhh you have so many pets :0 thats so cool!

01:27:11 Reaper / Grim

When you already made your big designs but still want to art :')

01:27:08 Mr Palette Guy

Bleh I might have to kick my dog off my bed I really need to get comfy

01:26:43 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
US rules suck

01:25:49 Venn/Venne

Shame cant bring agriculture products into the States.

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01:25:43 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

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I have the 16yr chihuahua, 3 American Bullys (7yr,3yr,3yr),the 17yr cat, and 6 other cats (7yr,7yr,6yr,5yr,yr, unknown)

01:25:26 Venn/Venne

You haven't lived till ypu had Taiwan pineapple either. ð

01:24:09 Mr Palette Guy

Venn, you lucky duck.

01:23:31 Venn/Venne

Spirit - mmm. Im in Taiwan. Endless supply of good mango here.

01:22:52 Mr Palette Guy

Fuck I want mango nectar.

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Wolves for cheap- Up for auction now!

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Wolves for sale :3

Please check them out!

01:50:37 Whisp

Okay chat is dead

01:49:24 Whisp

I just updated my bio what do you guys think

01:45:15 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
Your noodles have meat in them?
Damn I must be eating the cheap shit

01:44:35 Venn/Venne

Spirit - camt bring meat products either, whixh sucks cuz instant noodles are so good here. 😅

01:41:42 Whisp

GOOD NIGHT Y'all

maybe

Continental Wolves

01:33:11 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Collar
I also have 18 chickens, 1 duck & 1 leopard gecko

Don't be like me and actually get some sleep

01:30:47 Mr Palette Guy

Collar, night night

01:29:22 ♰ Vapor ♰

alriiight chat, i gotta run to lock in on comms and then pass the hell out if my energy drink lets me
thanks for the chats <3

01:29:01 ♰ Vapor ♰

emmet

awhh you have so many pets :0 thats so cool!

01:27:11 Reaper / Grim

When you already made your big designs but still want to art :')

01:27:08 Mr Palette Guy

Bleh I might have to kick my dog off my bed I really need to get comfy

01:26:43 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
US rules suck

01:25:49 Venn/Venne

Shame cant bring agriculture products into the States.

Continental Wolves

01:25:43 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Collar
I have the 16yr chihuahua, 3 American Bullys (7yr,3yr,3yr),the 17yr cat, and 6 other cats (7yr,7yr,6yr,5yr,yr, unknown)

01:25:26 Venn/Venne

You haven't lived till ypu had Taiwan pineapple either. ð

01:24:09 Mr Palette Guy

Venn, you lucky duck.

01:23:31 Venn/Venne

Spirit - mmm. Im in Taiwan. Endless supply of good mango here.

01:22:52 Mr Palette Guy

Fuck I want mango nectar.

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

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Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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