Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
https://s26.postimg.cc/wklv0qk7b/BCBE6_B40-6_C2_C-4710-840_E-525226233_B98.png?dl=1
Fall Month: 3 
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| Eye of Eternity |
| acorn hose defense thanksss :'3 its less writing and more just thinking about it until it works but same idea /silly no i do need a design he needs to exist i fear |
| Acornclan |
| Horse Defender Hose defense Good luck, writing is hard :") It might be harder to be rich, but maybe you'll end up not needing a design for him |
| Eye of Eternity |
| acorn hose defender /silly i,,,,, see theres more to it? and i don't know if in this patriarchal farming culture someone with a physical disability would be ,, rich? which he needs to be? or at least able to afford luxury oh she is |
| Acornclan |
| Hose Defender What about crutches ?silly those are not very fast But if it'd be inaccurate or just a chance sadly you might have to design a full man </3 She should definitely be a cannibal though :3 |
| Eye of Eternity |
| i dont even really need to design him he can be boring hes just a plot device |
| Eye of Eternity |
| acorn there's a chance, there are records from greece and china of 'wheelchairs' from about the same time assyria existed acorn again oh okay </3 /silly |
| Eye of Eternity |
| bug absolutely not /silly so turns out assyria might have had wheelchairs, but i dont know if shes sumerian or assyrian |
| Acornclan |
| Horse Defender Probably not </3 but maybe Horse Protector With wheels :3 |
| Eye of Eternity |
| acorn wait did mesopotamia have wheelchairs i have to go look that up now bug ,,,,,,no :( not in like,,, the year 3 acorn again with what legs /silly |
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| Chatbox |
| Eye of Eternity |
| acorn hose defense thanksss :'3 its less writing and more just thinking about it until it works but same idea /silly no i do need a design he needs to exist i fear |
| Acornclan |
| Horse Defender Hose defense Good luck, writing is hard :") It might be harder to be rich, but maybe you'll end up not needing a design for him |
| Eye of Eternity |
| acorn hose defender /silly i,,,,, see theres more to it? and i don't know if in this patriarchal farming culture someone with a physical disability would be ,, rich? which he needs to be? or at least able to afford luxury oh she is |
| Acornclan |
| Hose Defender What about crutches ?silly those are not very fast But if it'd be inaccurate or just a chance sadly you might have to design a full man </3 She should definitely be a cannibal though :3 |
| Eye of Eternity |
| i dont even really need to design him he can be boring hes just a plot device |
| Eye of Eternity |
| acorn there's a chance, there are records from greece and china of 'wheelchairs' from about the same time assyria existed acorn again oh okay </3 /silly |
| Eye of Eternity |
| bug absolutely not /silly so turns out assyria might have had wheelchairs, but i dont know if shes sumerian or assyrian |
| Acornclan |
| Horse Defender Probably not </3 but maybe Horse Protector With wheels :3 |
| Eye of Eternity |
| acorn wait did mesopotamia have wheelchairs i have to go look that up now bug ,,,,,,no :( not in like,,, the year 3 acorn again with what legs /silly |
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