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01:49:54 Kneecap stealer

Khaos

Don't you have 223 pages to read>.>

A bonsaitreasure

01:44:16

thanks :)

01:42:59 Kaos || Kháos

Spring will start tomorrow (12:00am game time).

A bonsaitreasure

01:39:52

hi all can anyone tel me when spring starts?? is in in cople of hours

01:30:47 Kneecap stealer

I have exactly 1k CP to give to my wolves now xD

01:25:50 Kneecap stealer

See ya
Tell acorn to behave

01:25:28 Kneecap stealer

XD

01:25:24 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

got to head off

01:25:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Kitty Its always her.... no one else shes not even kin to the last alphas.... I sware Array got to her sooner

Flightless Nesters

01:24:35

Ahhh gotcha

01:24:25 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

its almost 12:30... I should try and sleep not do my core exercies no matter how much I feel like I have to or ill not sleep and stuff....

01:24:23 Kneecap stealer

I love how you immediately knew it was acorn XD

01:23:33 Kneecap stealer

Oh I'm gonna put cp on someone else's wolf for mush to help me reach my goal of 4k mush

01:23:30 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@ Kitty after the kindness you showed me XDill talk to acornsprout in the morning

01:22:47 Kneecap stealer

Serpents

Control your pack XD I ran into them in explore just now

Flightless Nesters

01:22:27

I got some CP I'm not using or selling what wolf did you want it for?

01:17:34 Kneecap stealer

Waiting for a good deal on CP for mush XD so far I only see 30 CP=30 mush

01:14:34 Kneecap stealer

It's 1:14 am for me

01:14:19 Kneecap stealer

But it's lucky when you get rid of a ton of wolves and still have 100+ spaces and can mass breed

Flightless Nesters

01:14:07

Hello fellow night owls ( idk if it's actually nighttime for anyone else)

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01:49:54 Kneecap stealer

Khaos

Don't you have 223 pages to read>.>

A bonsaitreasure

01:44:16

thanks :)

01:42:59 Kaos || Kháos

Spring will start tomorrow (12:00am game time).

A bonsaitreasure

01:39:52

hi all can anyone tel me when spring starts?? is in in cople of hours

01:30:47 Kneecap stealer

I have exactly 1k CP to give to my wolves now xD

01:25:50 Kneecap stealer

See ya
Tell acorn to behave

01:25:28 Kneecap stealer

XD

01:25:24 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

got to head off

01:25:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Kitty Its always her.... no one else shes not even kin to the last alphas.... I sware Array got to her sooner

Flightless Nesters

01:24:35

Ahhh gotcha

01:24:25 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

its almost 12:30... I should try and sleep not do my core exercies no matter how much I feel like I have to or ill not sleep and stuff....

01:24:23 Kneecap stealer

I love how you immediately knew it was acorn XD

01:23:33 Kneecap stealer

Oh I'm gonna put cp on someone else's wolf for mush to help me reach my goal of 4k mush

01:23:30 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@ Kitty after the kindness you showed me XDill talk to acornsprout in the morning

01:22:47 Kneecap stealer

Serpents

Control your pack XD I ran into them in explore just now

Flightless Nesters

01:22:27

I got some CP I'm not using or selling what wolf did you want it for?

01:17:34 Kneecap stealer

Waiting for a good deal on CP for mush XD so far I only see 30 CP=30 mush

01:14:34 Kneecap stealer

It's 1:14 am for me

01:14:19 Kneecap stealer

But it's lucky when you get rid of a ton of wolves and still have 100+ spaces and can mass breed

Flightless Nesters

01:14:07

Hello fellow night owls ( idk if it's actually nighttime for anyone else)

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Critique please!

November 11, 2020 04:58 PM

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Exactly what the title says, critique away!

Edited at November 11, 2020 04:59 PM by Flower Field

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November 11, 2020 05:46 PM

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They lookin' mighty thick 0///0

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November 11, 2020 06:52 PM

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Lol they are thicc but gotta love that qwq

I am not a artist but for the one on the left, I think its face needs to be a bit longer like the one on the right because rats (and mice) tend to have longer faces and noses that stick out like buttons ^^

Maybe work on the toes a little if this is a comm?
Otherwise that is so cute and gorgeous! Love your style <3

Edited at November 11, 2020 06:53 PM by Crescents

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November 11, 2020 06:56 PM

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oh god

thicc rats are just what i needed

uhh tails look a bit short, I would make them just a touch longer. the noses should stick out a little more too

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November 11, 2020 06:57 PM

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I y o i n k

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November 11, 2020 07:48 PM

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I didn't even notice how thick they are at first XD

Yeah, the toes are really annoying to draw but it's not a comm so we good.

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