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 Wild Runners
05:58:27 Stalking chat
Hmm.. should I make it a running wolf gif?
YES SIRR make everything harder for myself lets goo
 TheFlyingKitten
05:52:21 Petri Dish/Dert
tern

Don't let his cuteness fool you, he is wanted in 37 different galaxies. *^*
 Eye of Eternity
05:51:34 tern | they/he
petri
awww puppy 🥺
 Wild Runners
05:50:12 Stalking chat
actually nevermind I'ma do this banner & alliance picture first
 Wild Runners
05:48:39 Stalking chat
I will now be attempting to make a kirin wish me good luck chat :"D
 Owlstar
05:47:13 tiger\Owl|she\her
Just pm me. I will be leaving soon
 Owlstar
05:46:05 tiger\Owl|she\her
*gasp* I just got a peridot eye dye from Bree with a junk bucket. What should I do with it?!?!
 TheFlyingKitten
05:44:46 Petri Dish/Dert
-Click-

He. The biggie G.
 The Rat Lord
05:44:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Petri Dish
Yeah so dose my dog we’re trying to train her to calm down when people get home
 Elduin
05:43:50 El (he,they)
My husky keeps barking at me sassily
 The Rat Lord
05:43:02 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Ok I’m off to watch some Spy x family I’ll check on my account after each episode is done so if you pm me and I don’t answer as quickly as I usually do is because I’m probably still watching the episode
 TheFlyingKitten
05:42:52 Petri Dish/Dert
Granted, the people he's been around have been oddly okay with it in general, so I guess the encouragement is actually there, if not unintentionally.
 TheFlyingKitten
05:42:16 Petri Dish/Dert
Rat

My boy (a GSD) is excitable, very loving but doesn't quite grasp yet how to show that love in a calmer manner. He expects everyone to be okay with his jumping as a sign of affection.
 The Rat Lord
05:40:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Stupid
Oooo I really like those ones, I think the red one is pretty cool
 The Rat Lord
05:39:23 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Petri Dish
Yeah my doggy sometimes nips when she’s excited but that’s only because she licks to much so sometimes her teeth get stuck on people
 Wild Runners
05:39:20 Stalking chat
Rat,
It looks like this
-Click-
 Schadenfreude
05:36:40 Clex Rules
Oh, this is my side account by the way. Should've said that first. Lol
 Schadenfreude
05:36:16 Clex Rules
Mud

No, no, no! He's really a sweet dog, he just got revved up this one time. We're both working on his reactivity and it's going well. Sometimes dogs just have off days (plus, he's young, one year. He gets fixed in about a week and a half from now)
 The Rat Lord
05:35:03 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Stupid
Yeah I’ve tried to draw one but it ended up looking like a fat dog with some disease XD
 Mudpuppies
05:34:45 
off to doggie boot camp

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 Wild Runners
05:58:27 Stalking chat
Hmm.. should I make it a running wolf gif?
YES SIRR make everything harder for myself lets goo
 TheFlyingKitten
05:52:21 Petri Dish/Dert
tern

Don't let his cuteness fool you, he is wanted in 37 different galaxies. *^*
 Eye of Eternity
05:51:34 tern | they/he
petri
awww puppy 🥺
 Wild Runners
05:50:12 Stalking chat
actually nevermind I'ma do this banner & alliance picture first
 Wild Runners
05:48:39 Stalking chat
I will now be attempting to make a kirin wish me good luck chat :"D
 Owlstar
05:47:13 tiger\Owl|she\her
Just pm me. I will be leaving soon
 Owlstar
05:46:05 tiger\Owl|she\her
*gasp* I just got a peridot eye dye from Bree with a junk bucket. What should I do with it?!?!
 TheFlyingKitten
05:44:46 Petri Dish/Dert
-Click-

He. The biggie G.
 The Rat Lord
05:44:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Petri Dish
Yeah so dose my dog we’re trying to train her to calm down when people get home
 Elduin
05:43:50 El (he,they)
My husky keeps barking at me sassily
 The Rat Lord
05:43:02 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Ok I’m off to watch some Spy x family I’ll check on my account after each episode is done so if you pm me and I don’t answer as quickly as I usually do is because I’m probably still watching the episode
 TheFlyingKitten
05:42:52 Petri Dish/Dert
Granted, the people he's been around have been oddly okay with it in general, so I guess the encouragement is actually there, if not unintentionally.
 TheFlyingKitten
05:42:16 Petri Dish/Dert
Rat

My boy (a GSD) is excitable, very loving but doesn't quite grasp yet how to show that love in a calmer manner. He expects everyone to be okay with his jumping as a sign of affection.
 The Rat Lord
05:40:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Stupid
Oooo I really like those ones, I think the red one is pretty cool
 The Rat Lord
05:39:23 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Petri Dish
Yeah my doggy sometimes nips when she’s excited but that’s only because she licks to much so sometimes her teeth get stuck on people
 Wild Runners
05:39:20 Stalking chat
Rat,
It looks like this
-Click-
 Schadenfreude
05:36:40 Clex Rules
Oh, this is my side account by the way. Should've said that first. Lol
 Schadenfreude
05:36:16 Clex Rules
Mud

No, no, no! He's really a sweet dog, he just got revved up this one time. We're both working on his reactivity and it's going well. Sometimes dogs just have off days (plus, he's young, one year. He gets fixed in about a week and a half from now)
 The Rat Lord
05:35:03 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Stupid
Yeah I’ve tried to draw one but it ended up looking like a fat dog with some disease XD
 Mudpuppies
05:34:45 
off to doggie boot camp




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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