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08:24:56 tiger\Owl|she\her

Anyone wanna trade cp??

08:11:47 Winter

Anakin
Percy doesn't like me lmfao

07:59:25

<3 <3

07:57:24

20 on resolve and 10 on social :3 yw!

07:56:08

Bambiix
On my wolf Romero please, but any stat! Thank you!

07:54:47

Puchin

Any particular wolf or stat?

07:54:18

Absolutely sure :3 it’s no good sitting there doing nothing

07:52:53

Bambiix
I’ll take it if you are sure :)

07:44:20

Would anyone like my 30cp to gift out today?

07:26:29

By the way, you produce some crazy good wolves quite consistenly, will be stalking X)

07:25:54

Maybe, still looks nice that he is not too dark ^^

07:21:23 Sith Happens

Could do without the leopard though

07:20:57

@Anakin
Agree :o

07:15:25 Sith Happens

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Amazing! :O

07:10:13 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Hurry
Thanks and your welcome ^x^

07:08:22

@Lucky Rat thank you :3 they are very pretty and golden

06:57:43 Aura/Pea

👀

06:51:12 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Hurry
You can look at my wolf sun diver, she might give you ideas

06:49:55 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever/gen
Yeah ok I’ll try that stuff tomorrow night I’m already fully awake and I’ve already tried to go back to bed but hasn’t worked yet

06:49:46

Caved in at last, bought wings for my pretty boy X3
-WP Click-
What other gold gear would look good on him?

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08:24:56 tiger\Owl|she\her

Anyone wanna trade cp??

08:11:47 Winter

Anakin
Percy doesn't like me lmfao

07:59:25

<3 <3

07:57:24

20 on resolve and 10 on social :3 yw!

07:56:08

Bambiix
On my wolf Romero please, but any stat! Thank you!

07:54:47

Puchin

Any particular wolf or stat?

07:54:18

Absolutely sure :3 it’s no good sitting there doing nothing

07:52:53

Bambiix
I’ll take it if you are sure :)

07:44:20

Would anyone like my 30cp to gift out today?

07:26:29

By the way, you produce some crazy good wolves quite consistenly, will be stalking X)

07:25:54

Maybe, still looks nice that he is not too dark ^^

07:21:23 Sith Happens

Could do without the leopard though

07:20:57

@Anakin
Agree :o

07:15:25 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Amazing! :O

07:10:13 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Hurry
Thanks and your welcome ^x^

07:08:22

@Lucky Rat thank you :3 they are very pretty and golden

06:57:43 Aura/Pea

👀

06:51:12 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Hurry
You can look at my wolf sun diver, she might give you ideas

06:49:55 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever/gen
Yeah ok I’ll try that stuff tomorrow night I’m already fully awake and I’ve already tried to go back to bed but hasn’t worked yet

06:49:46

Caved in at last, bought wings for my pretty boy X3
-WP Click-
What other gold gear would look good on him?

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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