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07:26:29

By the way, you produce some crazy good wolves quite consistenly, will be stalking X)

07:25:54

Maybe, still looks nice that he is not too dark ^^

07:21:23 Sith Happens

Could do without the leopard though

07:20:57

@Anakin
Agree :o

07:15:25 Sith Happens

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Amazing! :O

07:10:13 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Hurry
Thanks and your welcome ^x^

07:08:22

@Lucky Rat thank you :3 they are very pretty and golden

06:57:43 Aura/Pea

👀

06:51:12 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Hurry
You can look at my wolf sun diver, she might give you ideas

06:49:55 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever/gen
Yeah ok I’ll try that stuff tomorrow night I’m already fully awake and I’ve already tried to go back to bed but hasn’t worked yet

06:49:46

Caved in at last, bought wings for my pretty boy X3
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What other gold gear would look good on him?

Articularis genus

06:34:37 Zeppelin

G'night

Articularis genus

06:34:15 Zeppelin

Yeah my joint pain is too much of a bitch to let me sleep in peace no matter what I do LOL

06:33:05 Kneecap stealer

Night night

06:32:53 Kneecap stealer

Keep it in mind rat

It might work for you

06:32:22 Kneecap stealer

Imma go crawl under the safety of my blanket and snooze

06:31:45 Kneecap stealer

It helps you sleep, well, everyone is different so it might not work for some people like it does for me

06:30:47 Kneecap stealer

It's hard for me to sleep without it, me and my fiancee always turn it on before we go to bed each night

06:29:47 Kneecap stealer

I do too, but I again discovered the joys of sleeping with the fan blowing on you

Articularis genus

06:28:38 Zeppelin

I went on a long evening walk and slept like a rock all night, I do suffer from pretty awful insomnia usually

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07:26:29

By the way, you produce some crazy good wolves quite consistenly, will be stalking X)

07:25:54

Maybe, still looks nice that he is not too dark ^^

07:21:23 Sith Happens

Could do without the leopard though

07:20:57

@Anakin
Agree :o

07:15:25 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Amazing! :O

07:10:13 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Hurry
Thanks and your welcome ^x^

07:08:22

@Lucky Rat thank you :3 they are very pretty and golden

06:57:43 Aura/Pea

👀

06:51:12 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Hurry
You can look at my wolf sun diver, she might give you ideas

06:49:55 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever/gen
Yeah ok I’ll try that stuff tomorrow night I’m already fully awake and I’ve already tried to go back to bed but hasn’t worked yet

06:49:46

Caved in at last, bought wings for my pretty boy X3
-WP Click-
What other gold gear would look good on him?

Articularis genus

06:34:37 Zeppelin

G'night

Articularis genus

06:34:15 Zeppelin

Yeah my joint pain is too much of a bitch to let me sleep in peace no matter what I do LOL

06:33:05 Kneecap stealer

Night night

06:32:53 Kneecap stealer

Keep it in mind rat

It might work for you

06:32:22 Kneecap stealer

Imma go crawl under the safety of my blanket and snooze

06:31:45 Kneecap stealer

It helps you sleep, well, everyone is different so it might not work for some people like it does for me

06:30:47 Kneecap stealer

It's hard for me to sleep without it, me and my fiancee always turn it on before we go to bed each night

06:29:47 Kneecap stealer

I do too, but I again discovered the joys of sleeping with the fan blowing on you

Articularis genus

06:28:38 Zeppelin

I went on a long evening walk and slept like a rock all night, I do suffer from pretty awful insomnia usually

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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