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wait did mesopotamia have wheelchairs
i have to go look that up now

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,,,,,,no :( not in like,,, the year 3

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wheelchair go zoooooom /silly
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 Eye of Eternity
09:40:56 tern | they/he
acorn
hose defender /silly
i,,,,, see theres more to it? and i don't know if in this patriarchal farming culture someone with a physical disability would be ,, rich? which he needs to be? or at least able to afford luxury
oh she is
 Acornclan
09:37:33 Acorn (She/Her)
*/ not ?
 Acornclan
09:36:57 Acorn (She/Her)
Hose Defender
What about crutches ?silly those are not very fast
But if it'd be inaccurate or just a chance sadly you might have to design a full man </3
She should definitely be a cannibal though :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:30 tern | they/he
i dont even really need to design him he can be boring hes just a plot device
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:11 tern | they/he
bug
thank you thank you
 BuggyOs
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tern
fiiiinneee let the man keep his legs
 Eye of Eternity
09:34:13 tern | they/he
bug
he needs his legs trustt
 Eye of Eternity
09:33:57 tern | they/he
acorn
there's a chance, there are records from greece and china of 'wheelchairs' from about the same time assyria existed

acorn again
oh okay </3 /silly
 BuggyOs
09:33:47 Lucky Ladybug
tern
you're no fun /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:32:47 tern | they/he
bug
absolutely not /silly

so turns out assyria might have had wheelchairs, but i dont know if shes sumerian or assyrian
 Acornclan
09:31:06 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Probably not </3 but maybe

Horse Protector
With wheels :3
 Andypaws
09:29:54 Andy/Kait [he/they]
Just had someone (earnestly?) ask me if ASPD is real
 BuggyOs
09:28:08 Lucky Ladybug
Tern
uhhh rock legs! or peg legs :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:27:05 tern | they/he
acorn
wait did mesopotamia have wheelchairs
i have to go look that up now

bug
,,,,,,no :( not in like,,, the year 3

acorn again
with what legs /silly
 Acornclan
09:25:42 Acorn (She/Her)
he jumps all of the ponds and rivers and streams and rocks
 BuggyOs
09:25:42 Lucky Ladybug
Tern
robot legs
 Acornclan
09:24:32 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
wheelchair go zoooooom /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:23:31 tern | they/he
acorn
im cryinggggg he needs his legs to run across the entire middle east i fear :(
 Acornclan
09:22:58 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Since his previous partner or family member ate them and made her more inclined to /j
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ArtJune 29, 2019 01:23 PM


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Thinking of making an art shop soon so I can start over, after I come back from travelling and taking a break for my health

So I kind of like my art but at the same time fucking hate it. Please critique. Please price. Please just say whatever it is you want to say about my art, I don't care, anything helps 👌👌

Thanks my dudes c:

Have some examples [(c) 181238 for all]
https://i.postimg.cc/Kz7TFpKY/1561476031356.png
https://i.postimg.cc/wBQxjCkn/1561570981685.png
https://i.postimg.cc/0NRrQd1K/1560976296043.png
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ArtJune 29, 2019 01:33 PM


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* Boop*


I don't like your art and I do at the same time. Does that make sense? I feel like you could do better, I don't mean CHANGE your art completely but maybe do more unique styles, like maybe a wolf/dog with no hind legs you know real defects/injuries/ect.

I do like your art, and to me I kinda feel happy looking at it :) I would pay at least 500-800( Depends on how long it takes and what type of crazy colors they want) mush, I believe you Five( Or Cun) can go far beyond what your aiming at. I'm also trying to do better with my Art, so maybe my words don't really count ;\ as anything.


But I would maybe try new styles of drawing, maybe different and deformed poses..you know what WP is like :D
-BL

P.S Hope I helped <-<.
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:38 PM


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I'd love to constructively critique your drawings' anatomy, if I may. Perhaps look at references and draw from what you see. This can apply whether you're going for a realistic or simplified look. It's easier to simplify realistic references, and use them as a "skeleton" to help with anatomy. Hope this helps c;

(By the way, you may fully and absolutely correct me if I assume or observe something wrong.)
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:39 PM


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I personally prefer your older style compared to the new one.

This:

https://i.postimg.cc/76r99S5R/IMG-0677.png

Just seems a bit more signature than this:

https://i.postimg.cc/hPHhLbpq/6-C0-B60-C8-0-B18-40-FF-A5-CF-7-EF38997-CFEE.png

Just looking back at your older style I like it more. (Although I do love the piece you did of Lieutenant. That face is adorable *^*)
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:44 PM


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I love your art

However, there are some things that could be improved in my opinion.


The legs, firstly. In some pieces they look like they don't have any bones in them. There's not enough sharper angles, and in some pieces the joints are way too thin.

Secondly, the colouring/shading. If I'm brutally honest it kinda just looks like streaky lines. It doesn't look 3D. I'd be happy to help on this, even though I'm really not very experienced. I can also recommend some tutorials if you need them <3

Also, avoid shading with black and blurring it. Unless it's for a background/out of focus area, you don't really want blurry shading/colouring.

I hope this helps! And I do really like your art, and I admire how you're able to draw just about anything. But I would really recommend sitting down, browsing through DA (artists like KFCemployee) and looking at their techniques and referencing stock images. I know you're often swamped with commissions, but find some time to make art for yourself and focus on improving it ^^
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:46 PM


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Bilx said:
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I don't like your art and I do at the same time. Does that make sense? I feel like you could do better, I don't mean CHANGE your art completely but maybe do more unique styles, like maybe a wolf/dog with no hind legs you know real defects/injuries/ect.

I do like your art, and to me I kinda feel happy looking at it :) I would pay at least 500-800( Depends on how long it takes and what type of crazy colors they want) mush, I believe you Five( Or Cun) can go far beyond what your aiming at. I'm also trying to do better with my Art, so maybe my words don't really count ;\ as anything.


But I would maybe try new styles of drawing, maybe different and deformed poses..you know what WP is like :D
-BL

P.S Hope I helped <-<.


Thank you so much, noted <3

Good luck on your own art journey!




Cardinal said:
I'd love to constructively critique your drawings' anatomy, if I may. Perhaps look at references and draw from what you see. This can apply whether you're going for a realistic or simplified look. It's easier to simplify realistic references, and use them as a "skeleton" to help with anatomy. Hope this helps c;

(By the way, you may fully and absolutely correct me if I assume or observe something wrong.)


Critique away please <3
I will definitely look at references, that's 100% on my to-do list ^^
Also, nope, there's no correcting you here c;




Lt. Chick Fil A said:
I personally prefer your older style compared to the new one.

This:

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Just seems a bit more signature than this:

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Just looking back at your older style I like it more. (Although I do love the piece you did of Lieutenant. That face is adorable *^*)


Do you mean the cheek floofs or the fur style?
I'll think about the fur style but I'm not sure about the cheek floofs :/ I mean yes they were what made my art unique but I'm not a fan of them much anymore.

But if you really want the floofs to return I may think about doing a revised version of them ^^
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:48 PM


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I somewhat agree with Lil Lt.
Your old style was a nice signature that even without a credential on your art, I'd be able to tell it was yours. The newer style you've developed is also lovely, and I definitely need a commission of Lynx from you eventually *^* but besides that everything else is fine. Since you do backgrounds and your art is detailed, price wise I'd stay stick to 100+ mush per piece, as the quality is great. Definitely pm me once that art shop is made, so I can hippity hoppity into there and get some commissioned art from you
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Mavi said:
I love your art

However, there are some things that could be improved in my opinion.


The legs, firstly. In some pieces they look like they don't have any bones in them. There's not enough sharper angles, and in some pieces the joints are way too thin.

Secondly, the colouring/shading. If I'm brutally honest it kinda just looks like streaky lines. It doesn't look 3D. I'd be happy to help on this, even though I'm really not very experienced. I can also recommend some tutorials if you need them <3

Also, avoid shading with black and blurring it. Unless it's for a background/out of focus area, you don't really want blurry shading/colouring.

I hope this helps! And I do really like your art, and I admire how you're able to draw just about anything. But I would really recommend sitting down, browsing through DA (artists like KFCemployee) and looking at their techniques and referencing stock images. I know you're often swamped with commissions, but find some time to make art for yourself and focus on improving it ^^


Thank you! Honestly, if you're interested in showing/recommending some artists/references to me, that would be a huge help *^*

It really is the lines/fur as you say is what I hate about my art, it looks like I put no effort into it ^^'

Thanks so much! I'm going to spend all of summer revising, redrawing and practising ^-^

Edited at June 29, 2019 01:49 PM by Five.
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:48 PM


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Wolffang said:
I somewhat agree with Lil Lt.
Your old style was a nice signature that even without a credential on your art, I'd be able to tell it was yours. The newer style you've developed is also lovely, and I definitely need a commission of Lynx from you eventually *^* but besides that everything else is fine. Since you do backgrounds and your art is detailed, price wise I'd stay stick to 100+ mush per piece, as the quality is great. Definitely pm me once that art shop is made, so I can hippity hoppity into there and get some commissioned art from you


Thank you!! C:
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:51 PM


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Both. The cheek floof made your art unique from everyone else's. And lots of people seem to be able to do that type of fur style. It just seems like a more generic path in my opinion. And who don't love the cheek floofs?
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