Wolf Play : Critique

I'm back from reading, I need to charge my Kindle.
So Sacrifice= chaos and Kháos= chaos
So mod of any type means chaos... Or maybe wp=chaos. Or maybe just chat itself?

Pink kitty🐈

11:44:54 Kneecap stealer

A fucking classic

Pink kitty🐈

11:44:43 Kneecap stealer

Im currently watching YouTube on my tv and their getting rid of honey nut Cheerios

Ecifircas

11:39:42

You’re okay. I love you. c:

Collar

11:39:26 Altar 🦌

:"|

Ecifircas

11:38:59

Eheh. :]

Pink kitty🐈

11:36:32 Kneecap stealer

Rat

I have no idea
All I know is sacrifice came into chat

Ecifircas

11:34:28

Weaksauce aches, you say?

Collar

11:34:10 Altar 🦌

Ow ow ow

The Rat Lord

11:34:06 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

What the fuck did I just come into!?

Andypaws

11:33:57 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Whenever someone talks to me for more than like 3 minutes, I go a bit crazy. I dont need my professor to explain how to use Microsoft Word

Pink kitty🐈

11:29:03 Kneecap stealer

Or a skinwalker

Collar

11:27:09 Altar 🦌

Maybe more like a feral dog??? Lol
Weaksauce aches to be honest, im strong

Ecifircas

11:26:22

Collar, maybe it was a bear…

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01:00:16 Many moons, one me

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I just found a great deal on some cups $8 per cup and there's 4 cups

Pink kitty🐈

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What did I just read...

snake

12:01:40

my definition of chaos in the chat is when its full of new players who've never read the rules lol

Moonfall

11:55:31 Many moons, one me

Maybe the chaos is the friends we made along the way

Moonfall

11:55:13 Many moons, one me

I'm back from reading, I need to charge my Kindle.
So Sacrifice= chaos and Kháos= chaos
So mod of any type means chaos... Or maybe wp=chaos. Or maybe just chat itself?

Pink kitty🐈

11:44:54 Kneecap stealer

A fucking classic

Pink kitty🐈

11:44:43 Kneecap stealer

Im currently watching YouTube on my tv and their getting rid of honey nut Cheerios

Ecifircas

11:39:42

You’re okay. I love you. c:

Collar

11:39:26 Altar 🦌

:"|

Ecifircas

11:38:59

Eheh. :]

Pink kitty🐈

11:36:32 Kneecap stealer

Rat

I have no idea
All I know is sacrifice came into chat

Ecifircas

11:34:28

Weaksauce aches, you say?

Collar

11:34:10 Altar 🦌

Ow ow ow

The Rat Lord

11:34:06 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

What the fuck did I just come into!?

Andypaws

11:33:57 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Whenever someone talks to me for more than like 3 minutes, I go a bit crazy. I dont need my professor to explain how to use Microsoft Word

Pink kitty🐈

11:29:03 Kneecap stealer

Or a skinwalker

Collar

11:27:09 Altar 🦌

Maybe more like a feral dog??? Lol
Weaksauce aches to be honest, im strong

Ecifircas

11:26:22

Collar, maybe it was a bear…

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

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September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

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September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

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September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

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September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

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September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

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September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

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September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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