Wolf Play : Critique?

With all the pups my pack breeds I'm frequently sorting through pups while more are coming in. Interestingly, the pups appear just before the labor alert (which is really a birth notification). And for that first minute or so they each show up as rarity score: 0, generation: 0.... before their actual stats have time to load and the labor alert comes through.

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01:58:39 Axan hoarder

Every 15 minutes I belive

Siku of Kinapak

01:57:05 Siku

pups from the same litter are born one right after the other, with less than a minute or so between births.

A bonsaitreasure

01:36:59

do they have a change to get born each hour or is each 15 minutes>

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01:26:58 Axan hoarder

All pups from 1 female will be born at the same time

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01:26:46 Kneecap stealer

....I...have no clue,vpop her with a feather is all I can say

A bonsaitreasure

01:24:58

if a wolf is in labour will pups borns each hour of is it eah 15 minutes?

Tangled Moon

01:22:00 Moony

yeah. I'm now saving up to buy a fertility figurine so she can have her pups now XD

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01:21:16

Moon

That’s sad 😞

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01:19:13 Moony

Just gotta hope my girl will live for 5 more days...

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01:58:39 Axan hoarder

Every 15 minutes I belive

Siku of Kinapak

01:57:05 Siku

pups from the same litter are born one right after the other, with less than a minute or so between births.

A bonsaitreasure

01:36:59

do they have a change to get born each hour or is each 15 minutes>

Cypress Road

01:26:58 Axan hoarder

All pups from 1 female will be born at the same time

Sleep

01:26:46 Kneecap stealer

....I...have no clue,vpop her with a feather is all I can say

A bonsaitreasure

01:24:58

if a wolf is in labour will pups borns each hour of is it eah 15 minutes?

Tangled Moon

01:22:00 Moony

yeah. I'm now saving up to buy a fertility figurine so she can have her pups now XD

Ghoulish

01:21:16

Moon

That’s sad 😞

Tangled Moon

01:19:13 Moony

Just gotta hope my girl will live for 5 more days...

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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