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 Eye of Eternity
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acorn
hose defender /silly
i,,,,, see theres more to it? and i don't know if in this patriarchal farming culture someone with a physical disability would be ,, rich? which he needs to be? or at least able to afford luxury
oh she is
 Acornclan
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*/ not ?
 Acornclan
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Hose Defender
What about crutches ?silly those are not very fast
But if it'd be inaccurate or just a chance sadly you might have to design a full man </3
She should definitely be a cannibal though :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:30 tern | they/he
i dont even really need to design him he can be boring hes just a plot device
 Eye of Eternity
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bug
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 BuggyOs
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tern
fiiiinneee let the man keep his legs
 Eye of Eternity
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bug
he needs his legs trustt
 Eye of Eternity
09:33:57 tern | they/he
acorn
there's a chance, there are records from greece and china of 'wheelchairs' from about the same time assyria existed

acorn again
oh okay </3 /silly
 BuggyOs
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tern
you're no fun /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:32:47 tern | they/he
bug
absolutely not /silly

so turns out assyria might have had wheelchairs, but i dont know if shes sumerian or assyrian
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Horse Defender
Probably not </3 but maybe

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With wheels :3
 Andypaws
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Just had someone (earnestly?) ask me if ASPD is real
 BuggyOs
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Tern
uhhh rock legs! or peg legs :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:27:05 tern | they/he
acorn
wait did mesopotamia have wheelchairs
i have to go look that up now

bug
,,,,,,no :( not in like,,, the year 3

acorn again
with what legs /silly
 Acornclan
09:25:42 Acorn (She/Her)
he jumps all of the ponds and rivers and streams and rocks
 BuggyOs
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Tern
robot legs
 Acornclan
09:24:32 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
wheelchair go zoooooom /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:23:31 tern | they/he
acorn
im cryinggggg he needs his legs to run across the entire middle east i fear :(
 Acornclan
09:22:58 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Since his previous partner or family member ate them and made her more inclined to /j
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 Eye of Eternity
09:40:56 tern | they/he
acorn
hose defender /silly
i,,,,, see theres more to it? and i don't know if in this patriarchal farming culture someone with a physical disability would be ,, rich? which he needs to be? or at least able to afford luxury
oh she is
 Acornclan
09:37:33 Acorn (She/Her)
*/ not ?
 Acornclan
09:36:57 Acorn (She/Her)
Hose Defender
What about crutches ?silly those are not very fast
But if it'd be inaccurate or just a chance sadly you might have to design a full man </3
She should definitely be a cannibal though :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:30 tern | they/he
i dont even really need to design him he can be boring hes just a plot device
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:11 tern | they/he
bug
thank you thank you
 BuggyOs
09:34:40 Lucky Ladybug
tern
fiiiinneee let the man keep his legs
 Eye of Eternity
09:34:13 tern | they/he
bug
he needs his legs trustt
 Eye of Eternity
09:33:57 tern | they/he
acorn
there's a chance, there are records from greece and china of 'wheelchairs' from about the same time assyria existed

acorn again
oh okay </3 /silly
 BuggyOs
09:33:47 Lucky Ladybug
tern
you're no fun /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:32:47 tern | they/he
bug
absolutely not /silly

so turns out assyria might have had wheelchairs, but i dont know if shes sumerian or assyrian
 Acornclan
09:31:06 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Probably not </3 but maybe

Horse Protector
With wheels :3
 Andypaws
09:29:54 Andy/Kait [he/they]
Just had someone (earnestly?) ask me if ASPD is real
 BuggyOs
09:28:08 Lucky Ladybug
Tern
uhhh rock legs! or peg legs :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:27:05 tern | they/he
acorn
wait did mesopotamia have wheelchairs
i have to go look that up now

bug
,,,,,,no :( not in like,,, the year 3

acorn again
with what legs /silly
 Acornclan
09:25:42 Acorn (She/Her)
he jumps all of the ponds and rivers and streams and rocks
 BuggyOs
09:25:42 Lucky Ladybug
Tern
robot legs
 Acornclan
09:24:32 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
wheelchair go zoooooom /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:23:31 tern | they/he
acorn
im cryinggggg he needs his legs to run across the entire middle east i fear :(
 Acornclan
09:22:58 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Since his previous partner or family member ate them and made her more inclined to /j
 Andypaws
09:22:36 Andy/Kait [he/they]
White girl music, save me...




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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