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00 woah. thats cool.

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Eyeguy
Im doing well :D how are you doin?

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interview as in like, I have to ask them questions, they answer honestly only (i have a lying 6th sense LOL), then after a day or two, after checking over their answers, they either get accepted or not :3 Very fun job (seriously)

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Eden
wrote it on docs the first day, all of its info, roles, ranks, what everything means, ect
then copied and pasted into Wattpad stories the next day (yesterday btw :'>), then well- now looking for people to interview Lol

01:57:46 Eden/ Key/ TS

LIFC

as in physical copies? How many did you do? 00

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Eden
Cool :0
lol I made multiple different handbooks for my group (LIFC) in one day :'3

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Ever,

How you doing?

01:55:41 Eden/ Key/ TS

I have been busy looking after my gran and making her happy. I cleaned my 2 fish tanks, replanted some Aloe Vera plants and wrote a wattpad book in 2 days.

I got 4 chapters left lol

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Spinel
Loll

Wild Runners

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augh I hate not being able to refresh Magnus with my invisible jasmine..

Spinel Grotto

01:54:44

Baby I'm the full spectrum

01:54:10 Life In Full Color

-WP Click-
Welcome to LIFC
we are now looking for Butterflies!
Do you what it takes to enter the garden?
Are you a missing piece of The Spectrum?

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Ever

I am okay. I am just exhausted. My mind is finally quiet lol

01:52:58 Juicy Arm Boy

Key ! Hello :D how are you ?

01:52:42 Eden/ Key/ TS

hiyaaa alll :D

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Thank you!

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Rosemary

01:48:57 Kaos || Kháos

D: Someone pick a random WP seed. I'm too indecisive for this.

Hurry

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You sure X) ?

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00 woah. thats cool.

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Eyeguy
Im doing well :D how are you doin?

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01:57:46 Eden/ Key/ TS

LIFC

as in physical copies? How many did you do? 00

01:56:50 Life In Full Color

Eden
Cool :0
lol I made multiple different handbooks for my group (LIFC) in one day :'3

01:56:09 Eden/ Key/ TS

Ever,

How you doing?

01:55:41 Eden/ Key/ TS

I have been busy looking after my gran and making her happy. I cleaned my 2 fish tanks, replanted some Aloe Vera plants and wrote a wattpad book in 2 days.

I got 4 chapters left lol

01:55:08 Life In Full Color

Spinel
Loll

Wild Runners

01:54:45 Stalking chat

augh I hate not being able to refresh Magnus with my invisible jasmine..

Spinel Grotto

01:54:44

Baby I'm the full spectrum

01:54:10 Life In Full Color

-WP Click-
Welcome to LIFC
we are now looking for Butterflies!
Do you what it takes to enter the garden?
Are you a missing piece of The Spectrum?

01:53:48 Eden/ Key/ TS

Ever

I am okay. I am just exhausted. My mind is finally quiet lol

01:52:58 Juicy Arm Boy

Key ! Hello :D how are you ?

01:52:42 Eden/ Key/ TS

hiyaaa alll :D

01:52:16 Kaos || Kháos

Thank you!

Sikoa

01:50:14

Rosemary

01:48:57 Kaos || Kháos

D: Someone pick a random WP seed. I'm too indecisive for this.

Hurry

01:44:00

You sure X) ?

01:40:55 Kaos || Kháos

241 isn't as bad as I thought

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM