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11:33:47 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I think im gonna explore a bunch and try to get mush from quests

Night Raven College

11:33:16 NRC/Night/Raven

I don't have room to bury it.

Night Raven College

11:33:07 NRC/Night/Raven

Does someone want a geode?

Night Raven College

11:32:47 NRC/Night/Raven

I have two geodes and I can't open em

11:32:42

oh okay thanks

Night Raven College

11:32:29 NRC/Night/Raven

I think

Night Raven College

11:32:25 NRC/Night/Raven

Should be about 6-8 hours?

11:32:03

how soon?

11:31:57

ok thanks

Night Raven College

11:31:47 NRC/Night/Raven

Moon
Yes at least she should

11:31:28

if my wolf is 90 hours pregneat will she have her pups soon?

11:31:22 tiger\Owl|she\her

Andy I don’t even have 100mush

Night Raven College

11:31:19 NRC/Night/Raven

@Petri

Night Raven College

11:31:11 NRC/Night/Raven

Maybe because it's more rare?

11:31:07 Kneecap stealer

Hi owl <3

11:30:58 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Wild

Cannot emphasize how utterly broke I am lmao. I got 522 mush to my name

TheFlyingKitten

11:30:48 Petri Dish/Dert

Wait, what? Did I miss something?
Why is it that a custom wolf with only a 40-rarity pelt and no markings (Andromeda) is 16 apples while a custom wolf with a 60-rarity pelt and no markings (Hati, Bloodborne, Cosmos, etc.) is 1 apple?

11:30:29 Stalking chat

Probably sold though

11:30:20 Stalking chat

there was someone just selling apples for 1k each

Night Raven College

11:30:04 NRC/Night/Raven

It's a bad omen/j

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11:33:47 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I think im gonna explore a bunch and try to get mush from quests

Night Raven College

11:33:16 NRC/Night/Raven

I don't have room to bury it.

Night Raven College

11:33:07 NRC/Night/Raven

Does someone want a geode?

Night Raven College

11:32:47 NRC/Night/Raven

I have two geodes and I can't open em

11:32:42

oh okay thanks

Night Raven College

11:32:29 NRC/Night/Raven

I think

Night Raven College

11:32:25 NRC/Night/Raven

Should be about 6-8 hours?

11:32:03

how soon?

11:31:57

ok thanks

Night Raven College

11:31:47 NRC/Night/Raven

Moon
Yes at least she should

11:31:28

if my wolf is 90 hours pregneat will she have her pups soon?

11:31:22 tiger\Owl|she\her

Andy I don’t even have 100mush

Night Raven College

11:31:19 NRC/Night/Raven

@Petri

Night Raven College

11:31:11 NRC/Night/Raven

Maybe because it's more rare?

11:31:07 Kneecap stealer

Hi owl <3

11:30:58 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Wild

Cannot emphasize how utterly broke I am lmao. I got 522 mush to my name

TheFlyingKitten

11:30:48 Petri Dish/Dert

Wait, what? Did I miss something?
Why is it that a custom wolf with only a 40-rarity pelt and no markings (Andromeda) is 16 apples while a custom wolf with a 60-rarity pelt and no markings (Hati, Bloodborne, Cosmos, etc.) is 1 apple?

11:30:29 Stalking chat

Probably sold though

11:30:20 Stalking chat

there was someone just selling apples for 1k each

Night Raven College

11:30:04 NRC/Night/Raven

It's a bad omen/j

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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