Wolf Play : Critique?

anyone remember earlier where i thought the FMC had gory ghosts of our memorial garden wolves? no? this is why, i forgot how deeply disturbing her coloring is -Click-

Moontwisters

05:43:50

okay thank you all!!

Pink kitty🐈

05:41:34 Kneecap stealer

up to 80 hours (or 90) and 2-5 hours of labor

Caeruleum

05:41:03 Caesar

80-96h, plus additional 2-5h of labor

Eye of Eternity

05:40:49 tern | they/he

moontwisters
80-96 hours? and then 2-5 hours of labour, i believe

Moontwisters

05:38:21

one really quick question...how long is my wolf pregneat for?

Eye of Eternity

05:35:22 tern | they/he

moonfall
but i want to make fanart while the brain worms have me :(

i might just trace part of it im not figuring out the spacing of chairs and all that its not for anybody except me who cares

Moonfall

05:33:55 Many moons, one me

Eye, sooner you're done with your schoolwork, sooner you can start on fanart :)

Eye of Eternity

05:32:26 tern | they/he

owlstar
i want to... i want to.. but antonio just posted a video... and im so bad at drawing old men...

Wild Runners

05:30:20 Stalking chat

can someone help me with canine muzzles PM me please :)

Owlstar

05:29:55 tiger\Owl|she\her

TERN JUST DO ITTTTTT

Eye of Eternity

05:28:31 tern | they/he

i lied can somebody go yell at me to draw my fanart so i can do schoolwork

Serpents

05:24:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- name ideas please be like his dads and pm me

Wild Runners

05:23:42 Stalking chat

Anakin,
dang you got alot of divine health's from Dilemma.

Fernweh.

05:17:59 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Winter,
I wouldn't really say so. I had troubles selling a nice one for 10 mush yesterday xD

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Moonfall

05:49:22 Many moons, one me

777/3000 mush, and 83/175 moonflowers making slow progress, and I'm eternally grateful to Sleepy Kitty

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anyone up for an rp pm me

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05:48:01 Kneecap stealer

"ghost pups"

Pink kitty🐈

05:47:50 Kneecap stealer

She for some reason reminds me of the glory of the one bug EVERYONE loves

Pink kitty🐈

05:46:25 Kneecap stealer

There's this orchid wolf (heart boost) that I want in my pack that's 3500 mushies

SouthernScorpion

05:44:07 Scorpion

anyone remember earlier where i thought the FMC had gory ghosts of our memorial garden wolves? no? this is why, i forgot how deeply disturbing her coloring is -Click-

Moontwisters

05:43:50

okay thank you all!!

Pink kitty🐈

05:41:34 Kneecap stealer

up to 80 hours (or 90) and 2-5 hours of labor

Caeruleum

05:41:03 Caesar

80-96h, plus additional 2-5h of labor

Eye of Eternity

05:40:49 tern | they/he

moontwisters
80-96 hours? and then 2-5 hours of labour, i believe

Moontwisters

05:38:21

one really quick question...how long is my wolf pregneat for?

Eye of Eternity

05:35:22 tern | they/he

moonfall
but i want to make fanart while the brain worms have me :(

i might just trace part of it im not figuring out the spacing of chairs and all that its not for anybody except me who cares

Moonfall

05:33:55 Many moons, one me

Eye, sooner you're done with your schoolwork, sooner you can start on fanart :)

Eye of Eternity

05:32:26 tern | they/he

owlstar
i want to... i want to.. but antonio just posted a video... and im so bad at drawing old men...

Wild Runners

05:30:20 Stalking chat

can someone help me with canine muzzles PM me please :)

Owlstar

05:29:55 tiger\Owl|she\her

TERN JUST DO ITTTTTT

Eye of Eternity

05:28:31 tern | they/he

i lied can somebody go yell at me to draw my fanart so i can do schoolwork

Serpents

05:24:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- name ideas please be like his dads and pm me

Wild Runners

05:23:42 Stalking chat

Anakin,
dang you got alot of divine health's from Dilemma.

Fernweh.

05:17:59 Fern|Kinz|(her)

Winter,
I wouldn't really say so. I had troubles selling a nice one for 10 mush yesterday xD

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Critique?

July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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