Wolf Play : Critique?

07:57:43 tiger\Owl|she\her

Nice petri

07:57:10 Petri Dish/Dert

Wait... Not a single one of my wolves died today?! O_o
These are some persistent bastards...

07:56:56 tiger\Owl|she\her

Oop.

07:55:12 tern | they/he

-Click- i get to go to hell super-easy /silly

snake
i have no idea but apparently this guy's doing interviews with theologians so,,,

07:54:25

tern
now im actually curious what theyd include for instances like that :o
may also have to listen in lol, for educational purposes :D i like learnin about different religions and cultures

07:53:53 tern | they/he

dammit theyre too far apart to kiss im gonna have to do some editing

07:52:02 tiger\Owl|she\her

What do I do with the blood drenched wolf?

07:51:20 Petri Dish/Dert

Bruuuuuuh, today has been weird.

07:50:52 tern | they/he

snake
but i think with judaism at least there is no 'less favourable outcome'?? you just kinda. die. and theres also something about resurrection but i dont know whats going on there

07:50:26 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- K
Linky

07:50:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

Looks like he was drenched in blood

07:48:44 tiger\Owl|she\her

My brain says no

07:48:03

also "detailed instructions" lol

07:46:52

tern
interesting :o i guess they would just include the less favorable outcome based on the religion?

07:46:39 tiger\Owl|she\her

Wha- wait actually I don’t want to know

07:46:29 tern | they/he

i might listen to that while drawing toxic old man yaoi

07:45:59 tern | they/he

-Click-
im so intrigued???
i know for sure that judaism doesnt even have a hell how do you accomplish this

07:45:58 tiger\Owl|she\her

I really wish my HH boy was older so I could breed him with my reverse bonfire girl. Both have legendary pelts. HH boy has crystalline eyes and the girl has Rare nose. HH Boy was dyed.

07:43:19 tiger\Owl|she\her

Hehe 🙃

07:42:04 tern | they/he

eer
true...
and i have a high a in the class overall even with that quiz
i think its fanart time

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07:57:43 tiger\Owl|she\her

Nice petri

07:57:10 Petri Dish/Dert

Wait... Not a single one of my wolves died today?! O_o
These are some persistent bastards...

07:56:56 tiger\Owl|she\her

Oop.

07:55:12 tern | they/he

-Click- i get to go to hell super-easy /silly

snake
i have no idea but apparently this guy's doing interviews with theologians so,,,

07:54:25

tern
now im actually curious what theyd include for instances like that :o
may also have to listen in lol, for educational purposes :D i like learnin about different religions and cultures

07:53:53 tern | they/he

dammit theyre too far apart to kiss im gonna have to do some editing

07:52:02 tiger\Owl|she\her

What do I do with the blood drenched wolf?

07:51:20 Petri Dish/Dert

Bruuuuuuh, today has been weird.

07:50:52 tern | they/he

snake
but i think with judaism at least there is no 'less favourable outcome'?? you just kinda. die. and theres also something about resurrection but i dont know whats going on there

07:50:26 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- K
Linky

07:50:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

Looks like he was drenched in blood

07:48:44 tiger\Owl|she\her

My brain says no

07:48:03

also "detailed instructions" lol

07:46:52

tern
interesting :o i guess they would just include the less favorable outcome based on the religion?

07:46:39 tiger\Owl|she\her

Wha- wait actually I don’t want to know

07:46:29 tern | they/he

i might listen to that while drawing toxic old man yaoi

07:45:59 tern | they/he

-Click-
im so intrigued???
i know for sure that judaism doesnt even have a hell how do you accomplish this

07:45:58 tiger\Owl|she\her

I really wish my HH boy was older so I could breed him with my reverse bonfire girl. Both have legendary pelts. HH boy has crystalline eyes and the girl has Rare nose. HH Boy was dyed.

07:43:19 tiger\Owl|she\her

Hehe 🙃

07:42:04 tern | they/he

eer
true...
and i have a high a in the class overall even with that quiz
i think its fanart time

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM