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 TheFlyingKitten
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tern

Don't let his cuteness fool you, he is wanted in 37 different galaxies. *^*
 Eye of Eternity
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petri
awww puppy 🥺
 Wild Runners
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actually nevermind I'ma do this banner & alliance picture first
 Wild Runners
05:48:39 Stalking chat
I will now be attempting to make a kirin wish me good luck chat :"D
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Just pm me. I will be leaving soon
 Owlstar
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*gasp* I just got a peridot eye dye from Bree with a junk bucket. What should I do with it?!?!
 TheFlyingKitten
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He. The biggie G.
 The Rat Lord
05:44:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Petri Dish
Yeah so dose my dog we’re trying to train her to calm down when people get home
 Elduin
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My husky keeps barking at me sassily
 The Rat Lord
05:43:02 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Ok I’m off to watch some Spy x family I’ll check on my account after each episode is done so if you pm me and I don’t answer as quickly as I usually do is because I’m probably still watching the episode
 TheFlyingKitten
05:42:52 Petri Dish/Dert
Granted, the people he's been around have been oddly okay with it in general, so I guess the encouragement is actually there, if not unintentionally.
 TheFlyingKitten
05:42:16 Petri Dish/Dert
Rat

My boy (a GSD) is excitable, very loving but doesn't quite grasp yet how to show that love in a calmer manner. He expects everyone to be okay with his jumping as a sign of affection.
 The Rat Lord
05:40:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Stupid
Oooo I really like those ones, I think the red one is pretty cool
 The Rat Lord
05:39:23 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Petri Dish
Yeah my doggy sometimes nips when she’s excited but that’s only because she licks to much so sometimes her teeth get stuck on people
 Wild Runners
05:39:20 Stalking chat
Rat,
It looks like this
-Click-
 Schadenfreude
05:36:40 Clex Rules
Oh, this is my side account by the way. Should've said that first. Lol
 Schadenfreude
05:36:16 Clex Rules
Mud

No, no, no! He's really a sweet dog, he just got revved up this one time. We're both working on his reactivity and it's going well. Sometimes dogs just have off days (plus, he's young, one year. He gets fixed in about a week and a half from now)
 The Rat Lord
05:35:03 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Stupid
Yeah I’ve tried to draw one but it ended up looking like a fat dog with some disease XD
 Mudpuppies
05:34:45 
off to doggie boot camp
 TheFlyingKitten
05:32:50 Petri Dish/Dert
Augh, my dog got overly excited when my grandma got home from work and nipped her. >_>
This dummy, I swear!

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 TheFlyingKitten
05:52:21 Petri Dish/Dert
tern

Don't let his cuteness fool you, he is wanted in 37 different galaxies. *^*
 Eye of Eternity
05:51:34 tern | they/he
petri
awww puppy 🥺
 Wild Runners
05:50:12 Stalking chat
actually nevermind I'ma do this banner & alliance picture first
 Wild Runners
05:48:39 Stalking chat
I will now be attempting to make a kirin wish me good luck chat :"D
 Owlstar
05:47:13 tiger\Owl|she\her
Just pm me. I will be leaving soon
 Owlstar
05:46:05 tiger\Owl|she\her
*gasp* I just got a peridot eye dye from Bree with a junk bucket. What should I do with it?!?!
 TheFlyingKitten
05:44:46 Petri Dish/Dert
-Click-

He. The biggie G.
 The Rat Lord
05:44:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Petri Dish
Yeah so dose my dog we’re trying to train her to calm down when people get home
 Elduin
05:43:50 El (he,they)
My husky keeps barking at me sassily
 The Rat Lord
05:43:02 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Ok I’m off to watch some Spy x family I’ll check on my account after each episode is done so if you pm me and I don’t answer as quickly as I usually do is because I’m probably still watching the episode
 TheFlyingKitten
05:42:52 Petri Dish/Dert
Granted, the people he's been around have been oddly okay with it in general, so I guess the encouragement is actually there, if not unintentionally.
 TheFlyingKitten
05:42:16 Petri Dish/Dert
Rat

My boy (a GSD) is excitable, very loving but doesn't quite grasp yet how to show that love in a calmer manner. He expects everyone to be okay with his jumping as a sign of affection.
 The Rat Lord
05:40:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Stupid
Oooo I really like those ones, I think the red one is pretty cool
 The Rat Lord
05:39:23 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Petri Dish
Yeah my doggy sometimes nips when she’s excited but that’s only because she licks to much so sometimes her teeth get stuck on people
 Wild Runners
05:39:20 Stalking chat
Rat,
It looks like this
-Click-
 Schadenfreude
05:36:40 Clex Rules
Oh, this is my side account by the way. Should've said that first. Lol
 Schadenfreude
05:36:16 Clex Rules
Mud

No, no, no! He's really a sweet dog, he just got revved up this one time. We're both working on his reactivity and it's going well. Sometimes dogs just have off days (plus, he's young, one year. He gets fixed in about a week and a half from now)
 The Rat Lord
05:35:03 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Stupid
Yeah I’ve tried to draw one but it ended up looking like a fat dog with some disease XD
 Mudpuppies
05:34:45 
off to doggie boot camp
 TheFlyingKitten
05:32:50 Petri Dish/Dert
Augh, my dog got overly excited when my grandma got home from work and nipped her. >_>
This dummy, I swear!




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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