Wolf Play : Heya!

12:08:10 Kneecap stealer

Ok just wanted to see, now I can focus on my things

12:07:40 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
Yes two things why?

12:06:25 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
But you should go to better one if you want a good impression, Crystal hot springs wasn’t as Crystal it had some random hair and bugs in the water, so maybe you can go to lava hot springs I haven’t been there yet but we might go this summer

12:05:11 Kneecap stealer

Rat

Do you have the thing you want from the event shop yet or no?

12:02:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Yeah you should

12:01:13 Many moons, one me

Lucky
That actually sounds relaxing actually, I should add that to my wishlist

12:00:11 Many moons, one me

Jay
That's so sad!! I'm grateful the last time I went on hiatus I had one whole wolf left from my alpha line

12:00:05 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I am back from the hot springs ^x^ I went to crystal hot springs today and it was kinda nice (besides me occasionally accidentally gulping up vary salty water XD, and almost drowning because my sister jumped on my back when I was relaxed) other then that it was a nice time to unplug and just wash away my seasonal depression

11:56:36 Jay [They/She]

thank you Moon!
All my wolves died, so I bought new ones and gotta try and get good explore wolves again D:

11:55:57 Many moons, one me

That figures, sleep goes offline once I finally figure out photos

11:55:10 Many moons, one me

Hey sleepy, welcome back!

11:52:56 Jay [They/She]

heyo, im alive! I play this game off and on lol

11:49:52 Many moons, one me

Thank you andy, they're so sweet, but also buttholes

11:43:45 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Awww theyre adorable

11:42:07 Many moons, one me

Yay!!

Ok, so the black and white one is thumbs, he has extra toes where thumbs would be and multicolored beans.
The orange one is ginger, she steals thumbs' treats all the freaking time. She's the one that bites when I'm frustrated

11:40:26 Many moons, one me

You know what, fudge this, my profile ain't cooperating, so chat it is. Please don't strike me mods, I'm figuring this out and let me know if I mess up
-Click-
-Click-

Let's see if this works this time

Caeruleum

11:28:35 Caesar

Pretty pretty dud
-WP Click-

11:28:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Ive never had an issue with gifyu

11:27:31 Many moons, one me

Alrighty then, done a bit of research, not seeing anything bad, it's one of the few allowed to be used by wp which means rigorous standards... Alrighty, hopefully this works without anything funky

snake

11:26:00

Moon
yeah, it seems pretty good it's what I've been using now

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12:08:10 Kneecap stealer

Ok just wanted to see, now I can focus on my things

12:07:40 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
Yes two things why?

12:06:25 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

12:05:11 Kneecap stealer

Rat

Do you have the thing you want from the event shop yet or no?

12:02:21 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Yeah you should

12:01:13 Many moons, one me

Lucky
That actually sounds relaxing actually, I should add that to my wishlist

12:00:11 Many moons, one me

Jay
That's so sad!! I'm grateful the last time I went on hiatus I had one whole wolf left from my alpha line

12:00:05 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

11:56:36 Jay [They/She]

thank you Moon!
All my wolves died, so I bought new ones and gotta try and get good explore wolves again D:

11:55:57 Many moons, one me

That figures, sleep goes offline once I finally figure out photos

11:55:10 Many moons, one me

Hey sleepy, welcome back!

11:52:56 Jay [They/She]

heyo, im alive! I play this game off and on lol

11:49:52 Many moons, one me

Thank you andy, they're so sweet, but also buttholes

11:43:45 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Awww theyre adorable

11:42:07 Many moons, one me

11:40:26 Many moons, one me

Caeruleum

11:28:35 Caesar

Pretty pretty dud
-WP Click-

11:28:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Ive never had an issue with gifyu

11:27:31 Many moons, one me

Alrighty then, done a bit of research, not seeing anything bad, it's one of the few allowed to be used by wp which means rigorous standards... Alrighty, hopefully this works without anything funky

snake

11:26:00

Moon
yeah, it seems pretty good it's what I've been using now

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January 9, 2022 09:40 PM

Darkseeker

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I just need to know of anything I can improve on!
Older, non fixed, version.

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Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS

January 9, 2022 10:14 PM

los campesinos!

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i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

and the nose is a lil eh

January 10, 2022 09:41 AM

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los campesinos! said:

i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

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and the nose is a lil eh

I was saying the same for the calves and the hair 🥲

What's wrong with the nose? I NEEDA KNOW NOW- 🥺

January 10, 2022 11:43 AM

Former Pack

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I think the nose just blend's in too much.

January 10, 2022 11:44 AM

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Revenge Full Of Lust said:

I think the nose just blend's in too much.

Thank you! I'll add more dark lines by it, it is harder with her dark skin tone.

January 10, 2022 11:48 AM

Eternity

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I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

January 10, 2022 12:27 PM

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Eternity said:

I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

Thank you!

I mainly draw humanoids on paper, its so much easier to draw kinky hair on paper-

January 10, 2022 11:09 PM