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 EvergreenHills
05:06:22 Juicy Arm Boy
The only reason I started working on anatomy is because my dad randomly handed me an old drawing book and its from the 1920s 0w0 super epic book though
 Eye of Eternity
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eer
ohhh it is :00
you have!! we love to see it :3
 Jester
05:05:38 
Okay thank you
 EvergreenHills
05:05:06 Juicy Arm Boy
Jester
I think who makes the kill
 Jester
05:04:43 
is exp based on who makes the kill or is it shared?
 EvergreenHills
05:04:22 Juicy Arm Boy
I wish I got braces when I was a kid because this sucks
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Ever,
Okay >:D
 EvergreenHills
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 EvergreenHills
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Eyeguy
Awhhh thank youuu <3 the finished one is my oc Flame hehe.
I think ive really improved over the months aha
 Wild Runners
05:02:34 Stalking chat
should I mass breed my wolves again?
 Eye of Eternity
05:01:23 tern | they/he
eer
oooh thats so cool :000 the finished kitty on the left looks epic
 Pink Guys
04:59:45 Evergreenhills
These assholes are giving me no pups
 SouthernScorpion
04:57:03 Scorpion
must have alll easter backgrounds
 Andypaws
04:56:40 Andy/Kait [he/they]
Finally have some lore established for my new OC
 EvergreenHills
04:56:37 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Dear lord </3
 EvergreenHills
04:56:22 Juicy Arm Boy
Been practicing anatomy a bit :3 -Click-
 Eye of Eternity
04:55:39 tern | they/he
still pissed about the time someone told me to make my representation of hades look more like christian hell girl you have no idea what youre talking about leave immediately
 SouthernScorpion
04:50:14 Scorpion
ya know what I'd pay for. a Fae familiar (like you can on gear)
 SouthernScorpion
04:49:47 Scorpion
I have an elephant, fae, bongo, spotted turtle, water buffalo, reindeer, and tapir
 St. Cloverbeast
04:48:37 Will
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All the time lol

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 EvergreenHills
05:06:22 Juicy Arm Boy
The only reason I started working on anatomy is because my dad randomly handed me an old drawing book and its from the 1920s 0w0 super epic book though
 Eye of Eternity
05:05:58 tern | they/he
eer
ohhh it is :00
you have!! we love to see it :3
 Jester
05:05:38 
Okay thank you
 EvergreenHills
05:05:06 Juicy Arm Boy
Jester
I think who makes the kill
 Jester
05:04:43 
is exp based on who makes the kill or is it shared?
 EvergreenHills
05:04:22 Juicy Arm Boy
I wish I got braces when I was a kid because this sucks
 Wild Runners
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Ever,
Okay >:D
 EvergreenHills
05:03:17 Juicy Arm Boy
Wild
Yes.
 EvergreenHills
05:03:08 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Awhhh thank youuu <3 the finished one is my oc Flame hehe.
I think ive really improved over the months aha
 Wild Runners
05:02:34 Stalking chat
should I mass breed my wolves again?
 Eye of Eternity
05:01:23 tern | they/he
eer
oooh thats so cool :000 the finished kitty on the left looks epic
 Pink Guys
04:59:45 Evergreenhills
These assholes are giving me no pups
 SouthernScorpion
04:57:03 Scorpion
must have alll easter backgrounds
 Andypaws
04:56:40 Andy/Kait [he/they]
Finally have some lore established for my new OC
 EvergreenHills
04:56:37 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Dear lord </3
 EvergreenHills
04:56:22 Juicy Arm Boy
Been practicing anatomy a bit :3 -Click-
 Eye of Eternity
04:55:39 tern | they/he
still pissed about the time someone told me to make my representation of hades look more like christian hell girl you have no idea what youre talking about leave immediately
 SouthernScorpion
04:50:14 Scorpion
ya know what I'd pay for. a Fae familiar (like you can on gear)
 SouthernScorpion
04:49:47 Scorpion
I have an elephant, fae, bongo, spotted turtle, water buffalo, reindeer, and tapir
 St. Cloverbeast
04:48:37 Will
@Scorpion

All the time lol




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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