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Red Shouldered Hawk pecks Alligator 1 for 20 damage.
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And I'm level 17 in forest now

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Would love some opinions of a possible pelt please :)

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I got the last egg I needed yippee time to buy the Sakura Garden!

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Only 39 enemies on forest 152 T^T I how the prey count is high at least

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Jester
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SouthernScorpion

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I did not know the mother bear in explore could rock your sh!t lol

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I keep buying explore moves

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One more egg I'm super close

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What wolf you want it on?

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wait what does maternal do?

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Lol

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Jester
That's a nice offer

03:35:46

Next person that talks gets cp first come first serve

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Boop
Oooo nice one!

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95/100 eggs omg I'm soo close and it's only the 6th

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SouthernScorpion

03:54:48 Scorpion

Red Shouldered Hawk pecks Alligator 1 for 20 damage.
Alligator 1 bites Red Shouldered Hawk for 80 damage.
Red Shouldered Hawk sadly dies.

Night Raven College

03:45:11 NRC/Night/Raven

The background

Night Raven College

03:44:41 NRC/Night/Raven

-WP Click-
I love it!

Night Raven College

03:43:30 NRC/Night/Raven

And I'm level 17 in forest now

03:43:29 Kros

-WP Click-

Would love some opinions of a possible pelt please :)

Night Raven College

03:43:09 NRC/Night/Raven

I got the last egg I needed yippee time to buy the Sakura Garden!

03:42:26 Hallow, Eve

Only 39 enemies on forest 152 T^T I how the prey count is high at least

Night Raven College

03:39:24 NRC/Night/Raven

Jester
Thanks

SouthernScorpion

03:38:54 Scorpion

I did not know the mother bear in explore could rock your sh!t lol

Night Raven College

03:38:30 NRC/Night/Raven

I keep buying explore moves

Night Raven College

03:38:19 NRC/Night/Raven

One more egg I'm super close

Night Raven College

03:38:03 NRC/Night/Raven

Umm Rook Hunt

03:37:30

Night
What wolf you want it on?

03:37:26

wait what does maternal do?

Night Raven College

03:36:31 NRC/Night/Raven

Lol

Night Raven College

03:36:28 NRC/Night/Raven

Jester
That's a nice offer

03:35:46

Next person that talks gets cp first come first serve

Night Raven College

03:32:43 NRC/Night/Raven

Boop
Oooo nice one!

Night Raven College

03:32:24 NRC/Night/Raven

95/100 eggs omg I'm soo close and it's only the 6th

03:31:51

-WP Click-
what a lucky pull!

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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