Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

12:10:05 Kneecap stealer

I just found a great deal on some cups $8 per cup and there's 4 cups

12:04:10 Kneecap stealer

What did I just read...

snake

12:01:40

my definition of chaos in the chat is when its full of new players who've never read the rules lol

11:55:31 Many moons, one me

Maybe the chaos is the friends we made along the way

11:55:13 Many moons, one me

I'm back from reading, I need to charge my Kindle.
So Sacrifice= chaos and Kháos= chaos
So mod of any type means chaos... Or maybe wp=chaos. Or maybe just chat itself?

11:44:54 Kneecap stealer

A fucking classic

11:44:43 Kneecap stealer

Im currently watching YouTube on my tv and their getting rid of honey nut Cheerios

11:39:42

You’re okay. I love you. c:

11:39:26 Altar 🦌

:"|

11:38:59

Eheh. :]

11:36:32 Kneecap stealer

Rat

I have no idea
All I know is sacrifice came into chat

11:34:28

Weaksauce aches, you say?

11:34:10 Altar 🦌

Ow ow ow

The Rat Lord

11:34:06 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

What the fuck did I just come into!?

Andypaws

11:33:57 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Whenever someone talks to me for more than like 3 minutes, I go a bit crazy. I dont need my professor to explain how to use Microsoft Word

11:29:03 Kneecap stealer

Or a skinwalker

11:27:09 Altar 🦌

Maybe more like a feral dog??? Lol
Weaksauce aches to be honest, im strong

11:26:22

Collar, maybe it was a bear…

11:26:00 Kneecap stealer

Damn😂😂😂😂

11:25:58 Altar 🦌

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12:10:05 Kneecap stealer

I just found a great deal on some cups $8 per cup and there's 4 cups

12:04:10 Kneecap stealer

What did I just read...

snake

12:01:40

my definition of chaos in the chat is when its full of new players who've never read the rules lol

11:55:31 Many moons, one me

Maybe the chaos is the friends we made along the way

11:55:13 Many moons, one me

I'm back from reading, I need to charge my Kindle.
So Sacrifice= chaos and Kháos= chaos
So mod of any type means chaos... Or maybe wp=chaos. Or maybe just chat itself?

11:44:54 Kneecap stealer

A fucking classic

11:44:43 Kneecap stealer

Im currently watching YouTube on my tv and their getting rid of honey nut Cheerios

11:39:42

You’re okay. I love you. c:

11:39:26 Altar 🦌

:"|

11:38:59

Eheh. :]

11:36:32 Kneecap stealer

Rat

I have no idea
All I know is sacrifice came into chat

11:34:28

Weaksauce aches, you say?

11:34:10 Altar 🦌

Ow ow ow

The Rat Lord

11:34:06 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

What the fuck did I just come into!?

Andypaws

11:33:57 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Whenever someone talks to me for more than like 3 minutes, I go a bit crazy. I dont need my professor to explain how to use Microsoft Word

11:29:03 Kneecap stealer

Or a skinwalker

11:27:09 Altar 🦌

Maybe more like a feral dog??? Lol
Weaksauce aches to be honest, im strong

11:26:22

Collar, maybe it was a bear…

11:26:00 Kneecap stealer

Damn😂😂😂😂

11:25:58 Altar 🦌

Brah

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

Thought? Post below.

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM