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 Pink kitty🐈
03:25:37 Kneecap stealer
So I'm stressed
 Pink kitty🐈
03:25:14 Kneecap stealer
And this is while I'm taking care of myself, the cat, our other dog, bella, the house, and trying to make sure my husband comes home on the 20th
 Pink kitty🐈
03:24:11 Kneecap stealer
And the pain from my shoulder spread like 2 inches down my arm (still in the general area of the shoulder)
 Collar
03:22:47 Altar 🦌
Yes :] Trust :] It is 1am and Ive been so well behaved
 Pink kitty🐈
03:22:23 Kneecap stealer
We have a full blood pit bull puppy right? And lately I've been in a ton of pain but I still manage to take her ass out CoNsTaNtLy, every 30 minutes, even when she wakes up from a nap, so here I am, lying in bed trying to get through the pain until I go to the hospital later and all I smell is dog shit (I just brought her back in from almost 2 hours of being outside) and I go into the living room and all I see, is the living room is torn up and there's multiple piles of dog shit everywhere, so I'm going to clean up all the dog crap y'know? And when I'm almost done cleaning the sight and smell is too much for my weak stomach and I throw up, so I gotta take the outside trash to the dumpster later, the inside trash outside then put the outside trash in the dumpster yet again, then clean out the trash can in the living room because I threw up in it, then I gotta scrub every inch of CARPET clean so she doesn't smell her own shit anymore, all while Im supposed to keep my shoulder still and let it heal, so now Im sick, I'm mad, and I'm hurting (bad combination with me) and I remind myself this is why I hate dogs (no offense to any dog owners who might see it) so yea, my day is already stressful
 Sabbath
03:21:33 Rook
Hmm have you though?
 Collar
03:21:15 Altar 🦌
Give me paws ive been so good today
 Sabbath
03:20:10 Rook
The earthquake weather event has trapped me in explore
 Sabbath
03:10:24 Rook
Rant away
 Lurking shadows
03:03:01 
Hi
 Pink kitty🐈
03:00:51 Kneecap stealer
Guys can I rant
 Sabbath
03:00:07 Rook
good luck with the pups andy
 Andypaws
02:47:04 Andy/Kait [he/they]
-WP Click- shes in labor :]
 Pink kitty🐈
02:27:15 Kneecap stealer
Yay my nickname made it onto wild moongem
 Sabbath
02:18:04 Rook
Goodnight Moonfall c:
 Moonfall
02:12:36 Many moons, one me
Huzzah, my twins made it to sanctuary!! I think I'll just, go now. Goodnight everyone
 Moonfall
02:10:46 Many moons, one me
Ok it's now somehow 3 am for me, an hour after I said I'd go to bed.
I apparently I don't know how to go to bed/silly
 Moonfall
02:09:44 Many moons, one me
Lol
 Sabbath
02:05:12 Rook
Just... when I get to it LOL
 Sabbath
02:04:56 Rook
Hahah you feel maternal towards him. I get it though. I bought him because I feel the same way. He is so ugly and yellow and I love him and I will make him into a deadly weapon

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 Pink kitty🐈
03:25:37 Kneecap stealer
So I'm stressed
 Pink kitty🐈
03:25:14 Kneecap stealer
And this is while I'm taking care of myself, the cat, our other dog, bella, the house, and trying to make sure my husband comes home on the 20th
 Pink kitty🐈
03:24:11 Kneecap stealer
And the pain from my shoulder spread like 2 inches down my arm (still in the general area of the shoulder)
 Collar
03:22:47 Altar 🦌
Yes :] Trust :] It is 1am and Ive been so well behaved
 Pink kitty🐈
03:22:23 Kneecap stealer
We have a full blood pit bull puppy right? And lately I've been in a ton of pain but I still manage to take her ass out CoNsTaNtLy, every 30 minutes, even when she wakes up from a nap, so here I am, lying in bed trying to get through the pain until I go to the hospital later and all I smell is dog shit (I just brought her back in from almost 2 hours of being outside) and I go into the living room and all I see, is the living room is torn up and there's multiple piles of dog shit everywhere, so I'm going to clean up all the dog crap y'know? And when I'm almost done cleaning the sight and smell is too much for my weak stomach and I throw up, so I gotta take the outside trash to the dumpster later, the inside trash outside then put the outside trash in the dumpster yet again, then clean out the trash can in the living room because I threw up in it, then I gotta scrub every inch of CARPET clean so she doesn't smell her own shit anymore, all while Im supposed to keep my shoulder still and let it heal, so now Im sick, I'm mad, and I'm hurting (bad combination with me) and I remind myself this is why I hate dogs (no offense to any dog owners who might see it) so yea, my day is already stressful
 Sabbath
03:21:33 Rook
Hmm have you though?
 Collar
03:21:15 Altar 🦌
Give me paws ive been so good today
 Sabbath
03:20:10 Rook
The earthquake weather event has trapped me in explore
 Sabbath
03:10:24 Rook
Rant away
 Lurking shadows
03:03:01 
Hi
 Pink kitty🐈
03:00:51 Kneecap stealer
Guys can I rant
 Sabbath
03:00:07 Rook
good luck with the pups andy
 Andypaws
02:47:04 Andy/Kait [he/they]
-WP Click- shes in labor :]
 Pink kitty🐈
02:27:15 Kneecap stealer
Yay my nickname made it onto wild moongem
 Sabbath
02:18:04 Rook
Goodnight Moonfall c:
 Moonfall
02:12:36 Many moons, one me
Huzzah, my twins made it to sanctuary!! I think I'll just, go now. Goodnight everyone
 Moonfall
02:10:46 Many moons, one me
Ok it's now somehow 3 am for me, an hour after I said I'd go to bed.
I apparently I don't know how to go to bed/silly
 Moonfall
02:09:44 Many moons, one me
Lol
 Sabbath
02:05:12 Rook
Just... when I get to it LOL
 Sabbath
02:04:56 Rook
Hahah you feel maternal towards him. I get it though. I bought him because I feel the same way. He is so ugly and yellow and I love him and I will make him into a deadly weapon




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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 05:07 AM


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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 08:25 AM


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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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